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Larger/Original Version:http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2.....ix-d35fvut.jpg
Type of Response wanted:Constructive Criticism, would love to get Redlines, but can live without it.
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This is a sketch I did on some free time, however it's a little more focused on the clothing than the character itself. It was originally going to be the Enclave Power Armor, however seeing how much work would of had to been put into it to look like that, it would of been a bit of a pain to do so. So I pretty much modified it to make it easier on myself and the time I wanted to spend on a sketch. I've always had issues with hands, and I've found a few things I can do to improve it, but nothing that actually provides a good base for making hands. This is the main issue I've had over all my submissions (Only on DA for the moment)
Larger/Original Version:http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2.....ix-d35fvut.jpg
Type of Response wanted:Constructive Criticism, would love to get Redlines, but can live without it.
Artist's Comments:
This is a sketch I did on some free time, however it's a little more focused on the clothing than the character itself. It was originally going to be the Enclave Power Armor, however seeing how much work would of had to been put into it to look like that, it would of been a bit of a pain to do so. So I pretty much modified it to make it easier on myself and the time I wanted to spend on a sketch. I've always had issues with hands, and I've found a few things I can do to improve it, but nothing that actually provides a good base for making hands. This is the main issue I've had over all my submissions (Only on DA for the moment)
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 396 x 800px
File Size 76.3 kB
Well since you're primarily looking to work on the armor I'll focus on that. I like the general "feel" of the armor, but I question some of its practicality. For armor, his arms are almost entirely exposed. In addition, it seems to hug the curves of his body, which would either make it nearly impossible to maneuver in, or made of a flexible material that wouldn't provide much protection. The lower body also seems much more detailed than the chest piece, which just seems like a curved piece of metal. Consider bulking up the shoulder region and extending the arm armor down to just shy of the elbow.
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