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"I'll be there in a sec!" Cliff answered. One more room to go, and that was his uncle's room - they had always readied the room in case Uncle came to visit, but he knew recently his visits became more and more sparse. The lynx pondered why he saved this room for last - he'd have went to take a peek at it anyway regardless, but he also wanted to know if he had left something that'd explain his dangerous behaviour of drinking.
It was a small room, consisting of a bed, a window, a table and a wardrobe. It was clean, most of the knickknacks and doodads were all sorted or were the ones Uncle brought with him. Quickly getting to work, Cliff searched every drawer on the table, but nothing of interest ever reached his eyes. Then he went to the wardrobe and opened it. A few clothes and shirts, a couple of pants...
"What's this?"
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Trying out a different writing style this time in relation to dialogue and paragraphs. Any comments/criticism is greatly appreciated!
On the eve of Christmas, Cliff arrives to his home in Nanaimo to spend the holiday with his parents. While he's there, he learns a side about his Uncle that he never knew.
FBA ©
buckhopper
Cliff Matthiews ©
rainwhisker
"I'll be there in a sec!" Cliff answered. One more room to go, and that was his uncle's room - they had always readied the room in case Uncle came to visit, but he knew recently his visits became more and more sparse. The lynx pondered why he saved this room for last - he'd have went to take a peek at it anyway regardless, but he also wanted to know if he had left something that'd explain his dangerous behaviour of drinking.
It was a small room, consisting of a bed, a window, a table and a wardrobe. It was clean, most of the knickknacks and doodads were all sorted or were the ones Uncle brought with him. Quickly getting to work, Cliff searched every drawer on the table, but nothing of interest ever reached his eyes. Then he went to the wardrobe and opened it. A few clothes and shirts, a couple of pants...
"What's this?"
---
Trying out a different writing style this time in relation to dialogue and paragraphs. Any comments/criticism is greatly appreciated!
On the eve of Christmas, Cliff arrives to his home in Nanaimo to spend the holiday with his parents. While he's there, he learns a side about his Uncle that he never knew.
FBA ©
buckhopperCliff Matthiews ©
rainwhisker
Category Story / All
Species Lynx
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 34 kB
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