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I want to know what you all think of this, it is a first draft. I want to know what could be improved. I like to leave enough detail for the mind to make its own image, but not for it to be crystallized.
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I really like this ^^ I am sorry that I didn't read it sooner though >>
I cant comment much as the cold medicine I'm taking has me feeling muddled. One thing I can say is this. Try starting a new line each time a person speaks? That's what I've always done. Helps separate who's talking.
This is a awesome start so far I hope to see more soon. Lycanthropes always caught my interest
I cant comment much as the cold medicine I'm taking has me feeling muddled. One thing I can say is this. Try starting a new line each time a person speaks? That's what I've always done. Helps separate who's talking.
This is a awesome start so far I hope to see more soon. Lycanthropes always caught my interest
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