I hope you will appreciate this OC redesign. Kimi is the overfed mouse protagonist of one of my older short stories, and I felt she was worth a visual update ^^

Here is the original story if you never got the chance to read it before:

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Well Fed Mouse

Kimi once found a secret passage leading right into the human's pantry, a narrow cranny only someone as slim and nimble as a mouse girl could easily squeeze through. Keeping the lucky find secret, the clever house mouse quickly began to enjoy the benefits of her find. She made it an habit to raid the abundant food supplies hidden in this enormous stockpile, often snatching cookies as big as her whole upper body, feasting on them for days as she rested in the safety of her mouse hole, deeper in the wall. After a while, she noticed she had to travel more and more often to the pantry, for the food she gathered was no longer lasting as it used to. Kimi wondered if someone was stealing from her in her sleep, another mouse maybe? It didn't occur to the pampered little thief that she might have simply grown a bigger appetite after weeks of continuously stuffing her face with sweets, carbs, and nuts.

Oblivious to her increasingly soft and wobbly figure, the not so little mouse girl returned to the pantry with a new idea. Instead of leaving with supplies after a quick and sneaky raid, why couldn't she simply hide inside the pantry and make it her new home? It was much more convenient, and a lot more spacious than the cramped hole she carved in the wall, not mentioning it would save her all the useless back and forth, which were proving more and more arduous for the plumping girl, who was growing heavier by the day, and found the secret passage had somewhat shrunk to turn into a very tight squeeze, making it a bit of a struggle to shimmy her way through the cranny.

Truth was, when she first found the pantry, Kimi simply had to shift her shoulders slightly to get through the narrow crevice, her slender and toned body offering little resistance in the process. With a flat stomach and modest curves, she was a nimble little mouse, and she could move around without effort, silent as a shadow. Now, the overfed thief had bloated to more than twice the size she used to be, with a thick and fat midsection, her ample tummy so plump with fat it rolled on itself, forming a double belly. At the same time, her breasts had grown to ridiculous proportions, each teardrop shaped globe twice bigger than her head, and making it quite difficult to squeeze sideways in the passage to the pantry. It wasn't like she could suck her tits in after all, unlike her belly.

Of course, Kimi noticed she was somewhat curvier, but weight gain wasn't a very common phenomenon among mouse girls, whom where normally scrambling for scraps of food. She wasn't quite making the link between her constant gorging and her somewhat confusing new softness, and remained very oblivious to her increasingly diminished fitness, speed, and endurance. Once she migrated to the pantry, the reminders of her plummeting agility got few and far between, making it easier to return to denial, and she stayed there in relative peace for one full week, eating like she never did before. The young mouse girl never went to sleep without being properly made immobile by the fullness of her little belly, so much was her love of food and desire to indulge. She had no self-control, and no idea of the precariousness of her situation. Her rodent metabolism was making quick work of turning all her excess calories into fat reserves. She was ballooning fast.

If Kimi had been luckier, reality might have caught back with her a bit sooner, but she had one full week to fatten herself up at increasing speed. On the seventh day of feasting, she had certainly gained enough weight to turn a slender mouse into a chubby one, but on her already enormous curves, it wasn’t so easy to assess the damages. After all, Kimi had grown too top heavy to see anything below her bosom more than a month ago. If her voluptuous bust limited her field of vision, it couldn’t dull her other senses, and nothing could make her miss the sudden noise that arose from outside the pantry.

Something was scratching at the door, a meowing monstrosity she couldn’t mistake, for its mere proximity was sending countless fear signals to the most primordial parts of her psyche. A cat! The enormous monster had sensed her presence, and before long the humans took notice of the raucous and opened the pantry door to let their creature investigate. Kimi had to escape, and quickly. This place wasn’t safe at all after all. Hiding from humans was easy, but she had no clue there was a cat on the prowl.

Jumping on her feet, a large cookie crammed under her chubby arm for good luck, Kimi dashed toward the crevice, feeling dread creeping up as she found her run much slower than she expected, and much less sneaky. How in the world could she make so much noise? The overfed mouse was so heavy she was actually hearing her footsteps, the thuds resonating in the small pantry. On top of that, she found herself quickly running short of breath, huffing and puffing as she stumbled her way toward the exit, fighting against her bouncing breasts and swaying belly to keep moving.

Luckily for Kimi, the cat thing seemed like it was taking its sweet time to attack, and she managed to reach the crevice before being snatched. Frantically, the gluttonous mouse turned her bloated body sideways, and attempted to squeeze through the little crack, only to feel her oversized bust getting wedged into the narrow space. Using her free arm, she tried to push her melon-shaped tits inside the gap, glancing over her shoulder with panicked eyes to see that cat slowly moving closer, its yellow eyes looking at her with ecstatic delight. What a plump prey she was, wedged so helplessly into her own escape route. It licked its lips in anticipation, closing in.

Miraculously, Kimi managed to push her massive breasts through just in time, and she rushed to dash into safety. Unfortunately, she wasn't taking her thickened midsection into account. While it used to fit snugly through the gap, it was now way too fat to squeeze through, and she couldn’t suck it in enough to get out. Stuck and trapped by her own fat, Kimi saw the hungry cat monster raises a paw and prepares to strike her down, and she closed her eyes, tearing up in despair.

The newly obese mouse felt a heavy blow and, with an almost audible ‘’pop’’, she went tumbling inside the wall, freed from her precarious situation by the very blow that was meant to take her down. The cat meowed in frustration. It always forgot the humans removed its claw. What a shame… this mouse was more fat than flesh, she would have been such a treat. Kimi fled into the cramped wall, still holding her cookie close to her as the last remnant of these days of abundance.


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