Thou shalt not claim that "My Inner Life" is a good work of fiction.

XD lol thanks

Opening paragraph of that wonderful book begins as such.
Dreams come in many forms. Some good, some bad, some very realistic, even ones that feels very real. A dream may come to us from happy events, or even stem from bad events in our lives. Some come to us as a pleasure dream and some come as nightmares. Some become vague memories after time, while some stay very rich in our minds. This is a story about a dream that I had. A dream that became more dreams. A dream that would end one night then resumes the next. It became like a second life. Ever since I became a Zelda fan, I grew an interest in Link. I thought of him as the perfect man. One that you could not find of this world. I thought of him as a man that should have been. The more that he attracted my attention the more I became more attracted to him. I felt like there was a connection between him and me. Then he became a part of me, and after that I fell deeply in love with him.

OMG And i thought of another STOP WRITING THOSE DAMN FATE NOTES IF YOU SENT THIS TO 10 PEOPLE TOMMOROW AT 10 YOU WILL BLAH BLAH BLAH ><

It's a story about a woman who falls in love with a video game character in her dreams. I wish I could dream like that so I could pilot Arwings with Fox McCloud, or fight Starmen alongside Ness, or stomp turtles with Mario.

um ok?

It's amusing that one of your commandments is about proper grammar, yet so far every post by you has the grammar and spelling of a cat having a seizure on a keyboard.

Man, this.

lol so far i spelled everything right so i don't follow

"lol so far i spelled everything right so i don't follow"[/B]

You in all honesty see nothing wrong with the sentence you just typed? Really?
I'll correct it for you to perhaps allow you to precieve just how broken your sentence structure and English is.
"lol "(I will omit this term as it is internet terminology. "So far I have spelled everything correctly. I don't follow what you mean."

Capitalize your sentences, add periods, and use commas where necessary.

You are right and i do see but i should of put bad spelling bad grammar is ok as long as its not like "dude that vid was pawn!" i don't like typing a short comment to retards who don't care about grammar ,in fact my grammar is not that bad, neverless thank you...

Your comments rape the English language and seem to get more retarded as you post. Please stop posting and seek out help at the nearest educational facility available.

And this story is predictably awful. She doesn't even get key details right that every player of that game had she been paying attention.

sounds stupid

If you'd read the opening paragraph, you'd get an idea how bad she is as a writer.