I am now in terrible exhaustion, because I need to have time to turn in all my assignments at the university and I have almost no time to rest, I stopped drawing altogether now
But for a very long time, several months, I wanted to redesign Yoridan, because I have points that I don’t like about it.
1. Too dark colors, close to black. I often drew art with her that was dark in itself, like night or cave art, and she constantly became very dark after shading
2. Pointlessly complex pattern on the body. Like, she's got too many of those "curls." At first I wanted to get rid of them completely, but then I realized that I could not think of something better, so I just smoothed out the pattern in many places

The version I'm showing is far from necessarily up to date, I still doubt if I want to see changes in this form, but at least I tried. Do you think this look made her better?