
hi
i know its a short story but i hope you like it if any one does let me know and i can try writing a longer one.
i know its a short story but i hope you like it if any one does let me know and i can try writing a longer one.
Category Story / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Bear (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 2 kB
Springtime in forest nature, this a short tale of what happens at the awakenings from the harsh winter months. All true and as said, but not more than a grouping of fact what need a main character, a plot, and a great deal more story written to edify the author and his readers. I liked what I read, though the lack of punctuation made this a factual notating and not a story in the broader sense of the term. It owes to promise and should or could become an interesting story, whether a fantasy or real-life experience.
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