Hey there, commenting on this one for the whole series / review.
Thanks for creating and posting this review, it was very interesting to read and see the impression the manga has left with someone else who seemingly also has thought about it for quite a bit and gone "beneath the surface". It has reminded me a lot of discussions I've had with a friend while reading the manga as it came out. Always discussing after each we both had finished each new issue. The way you added your own art to illustrate points you are making in your review is also quite well executed and adds a lot to it.
If I will find the time later this week I will go through the individual pages and respond to some of the points you made. :)

Thank you for reading my review! This manga really had a lot of nuance to it and im glad there are folks out here that really appreciate the points Itagaki-sensei was trying to get across! This really was a one of a kind manga! I look forward to reading your opinions on the different thoughts i have in this lil commentary.

Cheers!

One week turned into 4 more months, but finally I have found the time to reply to the individual pages of the review I had thoughts on and hope some of them might be interesting to you.

Thank you! I will definitely be going through them one by one to see what insights you have~