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Part 2/3 from The Witch. This is full of gaps and wholes, and time lapses. Just like our understanding of history and peoples intentions.
I enjoy comments. ^_^
I enjoy comments. ^_^
Category Story / Fantasy
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File Size 59 kB
I want to give enough that you mind creates it with the help of the story, not a structure built right from the story, something uniquely seen by each reader is what I'm aiming at.
yeah, they are rough drafts...typoes may be expected untill final revision^^ 3 pages?...I didn't remember it being that long...
yeah, they are rough drafts...typoes may be expected untill final revision^^ 3 pages?...I didn't remember it being that long...
nnnooooooo, the longness of it! D:
read, good story though, sad. Not my normal kind of read, you silly sod I like puppies, kittens, rainbows, and acid trips. All thrown together into the halls of a madman with a magic pendant and a gun that fires ** :D
You characters seem real though; haunted. To be honest, I get bored by descriptions, while it is super awesome to give the details(a vague description can't always give what a full detailed list can) that why I try to "build the structure" and "let your mind furnish the halls" now read my unfinished 3rd one. :3
read, good story though, sad. Not my normal kind of read, you silly sod I like puppies, kittens, rainbows, and acid trips. All thrown together into the halls of a madman with a magic pendant and a gun that fires ** :D
You characters seem real though; haunted. To be honest, I get bored by descriptions, while it is super awesome to give the details(a vague description can't always give what a full detailed list can) that why I try to "build the structure" and "let your mind furnish the halls" now read my unfinished 3rd one. :3
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