HOORAY FOR MY SECOND EVER TF STORY WOO
Yeah, this one was a lot more ambitious than my last story, and is probably a bit of a mess in some aspects. I would be glad to hear out any advice or criticism, as long as you’re polite about it! I’m not quite sure where my writing strengths and weaknesses lie, so I’d appreciate outside input in that regard, so I’m able to improve upon those things in the future!
Yeah, this one was a lot more ambitious than my last story, and is probably a bit of a mess in some aspects. I would be glad to hear out any advice or criticism, as long as you’re polite about it! I’m not quite sure where my writing strengths and weaknesses lie, so I’d appreciate outside input in that regard, so I’m able to improve upon those things in the future!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Human
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 6.3 kB
Slowly began reading more of your work after we last chatted. Got caught up with some life stuff but really wanted to say so far enjoying these stories you've done. Starting from your oldest to newest since I really love seeing the progress made by creatives. I really enjoy the slice-of-life feeling these two so far have. The dialogue and clothing details are done pretty nicely to give a clear image along with the hair growth. I feel a bit more bias for your first one so far with how it's conveyed in a journal-esque format and how both personalities are quite clear to the reader with it shifting and it giving it more like a twining-epdemic for Senpai. This being your first to have more physical traits being described for the transformation is really well done! Excited to try binging more of these on my days off this week.
Bwah! This is a pleasant surprise, I was a tad worried I’d scared you off somehow nihbihbsvd- XD
I’m delighted to hear that you’ve been enjoying what you’ve read so far, I still hold a lot of nostalgia for my first pair of stories, ‘specially the aforementioned journal style I did for my very first! I’m glad I did a solid job for my first “standard” TF story, considering I remember sorta blitzing through the writing process (as things tend to go with me). 😅
One thing you’ll see in most of my works going forward (there’s one I don’t remember too well so I’m unsure if it’s all of them) is that I love focusing on the TFee’s reaction as the changes progress- surprise, fascination, enjoyment… it’s a lot of fun to write, and often just as fun to imagine bein’ in their shoes, bwehe~ There’s also my fixation on clothing, of course- if there’s one area of my TFs that I absolutely refuse to skimp on in my stories, it’s the clothes.
I’m absolutely looking forward to hearing what you’ve got to say about the next two stories, they’re easily my absolute favorites out of the ones I’ve written so far, both in terms of descriptive writing and the amount of euphoria they bring me. 💖
I’m delighted to hear that you’ve been enjoying what you’ve read so far, I still hold a lot of nostalgia for my first pair of stories, ‘specially the aforementioned journal style I did for my very first! I’m glad I did a solid job for my first “standard” TF story, considering I remember sorta blitzing through the writing process (as things tend to go with me). 😅
One thing you’ll see in most of my works going forward (there’s one I don’t remember too well so I’m unsure if it’s all of them) is that I love focusing on the TFee’s reaction as the changes progress- surprise, fascination, enjoyment… it’s a lot of fun to write, and often just as fun to imagine bein’ in their shoes, bwehe~ There’s also my fixation on clothing, of course- if there’s one area of my TFs that I absolutely refuse to skimp on in my stories, it’s the clothes.
I’m absolutely looking forward to hearing what you’ve got to say about the next two stories, they’re easily my absolute favorites out of the ones I’ve written so far, both in terms of descriptive writing and the amount of euphoria they bring me. 💖
LOL no worries! It's a wee harder to scare me off, just been dealing with big life changes with getting a full time day job and junk.
I'm excited to go further with binging on my "weekend" tomorrow(got super lucky that with Labor day it was slow enough to enjoy some light reading), I really like the idea of clothing getting more of a focus in TFs since especially with character TFs it's just as big of a part of the character as the anatomy and helps sell mental changes or disorientation of sudden new body if the mind/personality remains.
I'm excited to go further with binging on my "weekend" tomorrow(got super lucky that with Labor day it was slow enough to enjoy some light reading), I really like the idea of clothing getting more of a focus in TFs since especially with character TFs it's just as big of a part of the character as the anatomy and helps sell mental changes or disorientation of sudden new body if the mind/personality remains.
Aye, your real life deserves to take priority! I’m glad you could take the time to read through some of my stories, despite being busy! ^^
Duuude clothing focus in TFs is so good… I can definitely see what you mean with how it interacts with MC (or a lack thereof)-
“What am I… wait, no, these are… my clothes?” or “Oh, there are my glasses… how did I miss that?” (Supposedly, they were on their head the whole time… though, in reality, they’d just spawned/emerged from their clothes/body.)
Versus-
“What in the hell am I wearing..? I look like a fuckin’ cartoon character…” or “Bwah- where did those gloves come from?!”
Personally, a big part of the appeal for me is with partial/no MC where the TFee is into it, there’s something special about a TFee getting really into the process in one way or another… which, honestly, is something I need to explore more often, it’s just difficult to write without feeling just a tad embarrassed. XD
“Why does dressing like this feel so… right? It’s like… this is how I’m supposed to be. It’s nice.” “W-wait, these are… [character]’s clothes?! O-oh my god, this is... I’m… ehehe- ohohoho! This is awesome!”
…I really did spawn six whole prompts out of nowhere to give examples, huh.
Duuude clothing focus in TFs is so good… I can definitely see what you mean with how it interacts with MC (or a lack thereof)-
“What am I… wait, no, these are… my clothes?” or “Oh, there are my glasses… how did I miss that?” (Supposedly, they were on their head the whole time… though, in reality, they’d just spawned/emerged from their clothes/body.)
Versus-
“What in the hell am I wearing..? I look like a fuckin’ cartoon character…” or “Bwah- where did those gloves come from?!”
Personally, a big part of the appeal for me is with partial/no MC where the TFee is into it, there’s something special about a TFee getting really into the process in one way or another… which, honestly, is something I need to explore more often, it’s just difficult to write without feeling just a tad embarrassed. XD
“Why does dressing like this feel so… right? It’s like… this is how I’m supposed to be. It’s nice.” “W-wait, these are… [character]’s clothes?! O-oh my god, this is... I’m… ehehe- ohohoho! This is awesome!”
…I really did spawn six whole prompts out of nowhere to give examples, huh.
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