
I was suprisingly happy at how this turned out. In fact, this may be my favourite story so far! I'm even considering commissioning someone to draw this up as a comic, but i'll think about it a bit more first.
Annnyway. A young lion learns who's really in charge on the Savannah.
Better version over at deviantart: http://squashedflat.deviantart.com/.....itle-193470274
Anyone know how to get rid of that annoying punctuation error?
Annnyway. A young lion learns who's really in charge on the Savannah.
Better version over at deviantart: http://squashedflat.deviantart.com/.....itle-193470274
Anyone know how to get rid of that annoying punctuation error?
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 12 kB
Listed in Folders
Well, besides a few misspellings of words (which probably aren't misspelled to YOU, but to me they are), and those stupid errors that the computer makes, this was perfect! Not only was it funny, sexy, full of squashing and flattening, but also a good four pages and some new interesting characters. I'm proud of you, Jeremy! Nice work!
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