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Yeah, I found an old comic book again, the "Mutanimals". Must have been a comic series way back in the 1990th, and I only have two of them, but it was quite entertaining, featuring the well-known Ninja Turtles and other anthro animals. One of the stories is taking place in brazil, with the Mutanimals fighting against a group of ruthless humans exploiting the rainforest. One of the characters here is an anthropomorphic jaguar called Jagwar, and as I took a look at my old comics I did a short story about him.
(IMPORTANT: I edited the old version, removing some typos and putting some more details to the footsmother scene.)
(IMPORTANT: I edited the old version, removing some typos and putting some more details to the footsmother scene.)
Category Story / Paw
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(Superb... because the comments I recieved will also be deleted whan I remove my first version of this story, I included them here. Hope that's okay for you, Tyranosaur and lenlenlen.)
tyranosaur
Its nice to see another story from you friend, i really enjoy reading your storys, and this one its short, but you continue keeping your lovely and awesome style.
Please, never change, and hope I can read more storys from you soon :)
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lenlenlen
Hies, Uncie.
„Water means that you will be drowned in the river, letting your soul become one with this pure element. Earth means that I will lead you to an area near the river consisting of quicksand. The quicksand will pull you down and make you one with the earth. Fire means that your life will end on a pyre, your body being consumed and turned to ashes. And air means that your lungs will be prevented from keeping you alive, so your body won’t be hurt. As air is the cleanest element, this will be the cleanest death.“
This part of your story really gave me the inclination you were going to add a foot smothering scene. You write so poetically and masterfully. You paint a vivid picture through the eyes of Ricardo Nunez, how he knew he was defeated, his revelation of how he needs to choose his death, and the portrayal of Jagwar. Totally enjoyed reading this, Uncie. <3
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tyranosaur
Its nice to see another story from you friend, i really enjoy reading your storys, and this one its short, but you continue keeping your lovely and awesome style.
Please, never change, and hope I can read more storys from you soon :)
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lenlenlen
Hies, Uncie.
„Water means that you will be drowned in the river, letting your soul become one with this pure element. Earth means that I will lead you to an area near the river consisting of quicksand. The quicksand will pull you down and make you one with the earth. Fire means that your life will end on a pyre, your body being consumed and turned to ashes. And air means that your lungs will be prevented from keeping you alive, so your body won’t be hurt. As air is the cleanest element, this will be the cleanest death.“
This part of your story really gave me the inclination you were going to add a foot smothering scene. You write so poetically and masterfully. You paint a vivid picture through the eyes of Ricardo Nunez, how he knew he was defeated, his revelation of how he needs to choose his death, and the portrayal of Jagwar. Totally enjoyed reading this, Uncie. <3
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