Yeey! I'm glad you think that n.n

Definitely an upgrade.

Great! ^^

Upgrade for sure!

Awesome :D

His hair looks dumb

which of the two versions? or both?

The left. Right one looks 🙂

Haha, I'll see if I can improve that in the future n.n

Upgrade, definitely!
That's quite a difference in just one year.

I hope to continue improving in the future n.n

Total upgrade <3

Thanks a lot <3 <3

Better lighting, hair, proportion, expressions

Definitely an upgrade

I'm so glad yo think that :3

it's totally an upgrade ^^

Thanks n.n

De nada, amigo. Has mejorado mucho.

Definitely an improvement. Your story line/writing is also excellent. It is engaging and coherent, without being predictable.

Not that you asked, but looking through your gallery I see a wide range of attractive characters, but you have a more limited range of facial expressions. Take a look at "Passing Love" by Meesh. The story line is pretty simple/predictable... even cliched in places, but his nuanced and occasionally over the top, body language and expressions keeps it interesting.

I'm not suggesting you copy him, or that one is better than the other, but look at his technique and see if anything inspires you.

hey! that is an excellent suggestion! :3
and I think that I could agree with your observation,
I could make the characters more expressive.
thank you so much n.n

Passing love is not free though (except on pirate websites), but meesh's gallery is a good reference overall

Relax, pussycat. I read it on Patreon. And, for the love of dog, please ask Meesh to start the next chapter! I am dying to know if Joe is gentleman or a cad. (we'll know by how he carries himself in the morning

Oh, I wasn't making any allegations. I was just saying that so that Zoul knows, is all

I think Meesh is busy w/ other projects at the moment, but I sure am looking forward to the rest of Passing Love :)

Upgrade, more natural

Verry much an upgrade however i prefer the visual mood of the older strips