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From "Magma Drive". In this scene we are introduced to the Anaei doing what they do best, planet core mining.
Category Music / Other Music
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 104px
File Size 4.03 MB
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Piano half way through seemed to not fit with the theme you originally had. It started off as a rock-ish feel. Then when you did that it turned into Latino music which didnt blend well for me, but thats just me. The piano also had a few notes that "seemed" missed.
The piano at the end fit with the theme a little more.
The theme itself is very interesting.
The very very begining was excelent. I liked the begining and end the most.
There was a few minor timing issues with the percussion at the begining at exactly measure 9 or 0:16.
This goes without saying of course but the critique I give doesnt necesarilly mean that it is right or that it "needs to be changed" it just shows my oppinion. I recognize that everyone has there individual styles.
I hope that was helpful.
nathanaelPlatier
Piano half way through seemed to not fit with the theme you originally had. It started off as a rock-ish feel. Then when you did that it turned into Latino music which didnt blend well for me, but thats just me. The piano also had a few notes that "seemed" missed.
The piano at the end fit with the theme a little more.
The theme itself is very interesting.
The very very begining was excelent. I liked the begining and end the most.
There was a few minor timing issues with the percussion at the begining at exactly measure 9 or 0:16.
This goes without saying of course but the critique I give doesnt necesarilly mean that it is right or that it "needs to be changed" it just shows my oppinion. I recognize that everyone has there individual styles.
I hope that was helpful.
nathanaelPlatier
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