Love that outfit!

Oh, now this is very cool! I love what you did with her outfit, especially her armor and the shirt she's wearing. I realized after I sent the info along to you that I was kind of vague on those details, but they look fantastic! The fingerless gloves are a great addition! Ciara looks absolutely gorgeous in your style, too, and I really love her expression. It really nails down the mood I was looking for just perfectly. Thanks so much!

I'm glad this was what you were looking for, I was honestly a bit worried about getting a proper feel for the emotion.

she looks angry about her work or something?

pretty much.

I guess that's one way to put it. Long story short, she's the estranged, illegitimate daughter of the king of major city-state. He went to war, which caused the destruction of her adopted home as well as half the island they live on before he went on to get himself killed. Now she's the sole heir of a kingdom which didn't want her, and it has been left up to her to stop the war before it kills everybody on both sides of the conflict. And she can't just walk away because she made a promise to stop it.

:< that sucks...... dose it happen or would that spoil the story?

I'm re-posting the story right now, moving along at a chapter or two a day. So it's going to be up for you to read it before too much longer. But most of the people who know the story have already read it once, so I could just tell you if you'd prefer. It's kind of a full-length novel so it depends on how much you like reading.

ah i see well......... tell me please?.... lol ^^;

Well, again, it's a bit of a long story but yes, she does end up stopping the war in the end. She's made queen, though only temporarily because she doesn't really want the job, and she manages to drive back the enemy and make a kind of peace with them. Then she goes back home.

Which sounds kind of anti-climactic, I know, but it's better in the actual book.

i bet but also..... well its better then hollywood and japan.

I don't know about Japan, but it's not hard to be better than Hollywood these days! Not that I'm any great shakes as a writer. I've got a looong way to go on that. But I like to think that I try my best.

well if you ever watch some of there stuff half the time they kill off all the characters to there storys sep for the hero and his woman or if its a lesbian themed story its just the hero....