Slightly intimate details, have considered marking this "Mature"

This is written in first person. Imagine someone is asking questions about Jessica's features.
Don't critique, but please ask questions... I plan on updating the original to the point that it becomes a refsheet in 1000 words (give or take a million), and then I'll post the completed one if people are interested. I'm also looking for someone from whom I may commission a "real" refsheet from, but considering I can -barely- draw and have fallen (desperately) out of practice, I figure this is the best way I can approach the problem.

Also: Don't expect a friend to proof-read like an English teacher, when said friend has an aversion to reading books.