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Jordan – Chapter 13

I was in a strange place, pure white surfaces everywhere. I wasn’t floating like I thought I would when I die. Yeah, I know, silly me and my imagination, hehe. I was happy again. For the first time in a while I was clean…naked but clean. I walked forwards but got nowhere. Everything was the exact same.

“Looking for something?” I voice said from behind me. I turned to see who it was. He was another fox, one I have never seen before but yet he looked familiar. He was older looking. There were grey tipped hairs around his muzzle. He was wearing a pure white shirt and pants. He was a lot taller than me, about a foot and a half taller.

“Are…are you GOD?!” I said shockingly.

“Hahaha, No young one I am not. You can only get to god when you’re dead.” He said in his low husky voice.

“So…so I’m not dead?”

“Haha, of course not! You only got a 3inch knife in your stomach. That won’t kill you unless you’re unable to get doctor help.”

“But I can’t. Last I remember I was in a field with Elliot at 2 in the morning!”

“Ah, Elliot, a wise and brave fox, that one. Yes, he brought you to a hospital, even though he had severe injuries. Hold on to that fox. He’s a good one!”

“What? He did! Then where am I now?”

“You’re in a comma, but don’t worry. You’ll wake up soon.”

“And who are you?”

“Kyle, I’m your watcher.”

“My what?”

“Your watcher, sort of like a guardian angel, but unlike angels I was never born, I was never alive. You created me as a cub; the way you played with things told me what you liked. The way you cried for something’s told me what you needed or hated. I have been here looking over you all this time. I didn’t know you were gay until I saw you looking at boys in the locker room, Yeah, I seen that, hehe.”

“Oh…um....”

“It’s ok Kyle; I know what’s best for you. You like boys’ right, I know that fox is the best thing that has ever happened to you.”

“And what about Jordan? What will I do about him?”

“Don’t worry about him. He won’t be bothering anyone anymore.”

“B-but…how?”

“Do you not think the doctor were wondering how you got so injured? Elliot told them when you two got there. The cops caught him soon after. He was sitting in Phoenix Park, on that same bench you and Elliot…yeah.”

“Oh, hehe. Well that’s great! When can I go back down?”

“How do you know you up? No pun intended. Pup, you’re not dead! Or in heaven or hell or anywhere! This place is from your imagination, there isn’t anything here now because you haven’t had any great memories that weren’t spoiled by Jordan or your mom or some fur. When you have unforgettable good memories they get stored here.”

“…You still haven’t answered my question.”

“Well, I’ll let you go now then, naïve pup. You got a court case with Jordan next week by the way.”



*POP*


I opened my eyes, it was night-time. There was a TV on the wall showing some kids program but the volume was turned down. There was one lamp on the corner and on hanging from the ceiling.

In the corner, on an armchair asleep, with a copy of Fur-piled in his paws, was Elliot. I stared at him smiling. Too tired to wake him and he was exhausted anyway.

I reached over to grab his paw and when I did he awoke.

“Kyle! Kyle you’re awake! Thank God!”

“I Love you Elliot! So much!”

“Me too, Kyle. Me too.”