this turned out! this cleaner style is definitely better, mate. There are very few people that can pull off amazing looking rough work. Also, the style you've chosen for him is an anime flavored style, similar in ways to mine. That sort of style needs to be somewhat crisp like it is here. Nice work man XD

Thank you, dude I'm working to define my style, but I guess it'll take some more time and practice.

I'd say this is pretty defined XD Don't focus so much on being original. nothing really is. remember what I told you. It's original because what you did with the things that influenced and inspired you all came together to form this. You can't just pull originality out of nothing. originality is something that happens as a result of the things you have taken ois already and how you use them. So yeah, this is a defined and original style and I really like what you have going on here. keep it up XD

Thanks, really thanks, but it that I'm not really satisfied, I want to leave a more sleek feeling in my drawings... In all of them, like in my featured submission. I want to get a standard about that, and I feel I can't get it in every picture.

well, like I said, in this one, you have it XD

BTW I based the design of this character in the Lion King, but it really ended very like yours haha

so awesome pic. ^^

Thank you n_n