Ooooh that pose is lovely! :D I'm sure it will look awesome once you have the flowy material all coloured! :D

The only thing i can think of is the hand going across the face is a little big compared to the other one, or that the fingers are a little too thick. But other than that it works really well as a pose! :D The hair also needs to be a lot longer, as it comes to mid-back, so if you could make the hair a bit longer that would be awesome :)

I'll try and have yours sketched up within the next week or so, haven't had any time to breathe recently :) So i'll let you know when it's up! Thanks so much! <333