I think the Hound already has the Wolf's key.

We'll see it in the full version.

I just noticed now that I didn't send the whole passage. The file has now been replaced. I apologize for the confusion.

Interesting exchange. Seems playful on the surface, but there's something kind of sinister about the ending line.

I'm thinking of developing the plot somehow, but I don't know how yet...

The final line definitely puts a different spin on things!

I'm glad you liked it, even though I think it's an unfortunate piece of work. So do the rest of my stories.

Ah OK, well as you say its a small part of a larger piece.

*laughs... well played...

Vix

THank you

I like how you wrote this as how an actual movie script would look, bravo for the physical realism in that regard.

Arguing over car keys, a very believable, 'slice of life' type of situation. Every couple has likely been in this situation. "Shit, can't find my keys, no time to look, you have to take me to work!" This actually gives the other partner a chance to shine and show the first partner "Hey, good thing I'm here to save you..."

Haha! I was never even expecting how it ended, The Hound, the 2nd partner, causing this whole ordeal in the first place. Just playing a trick on his husband? Or maybe he thought he might be rewarded with a Kiss and thought it a worthy investment of risk?

I'm loving your style of short stories, sweet and easy to digest, you could easily write a show that has 3 or more miniature scenes taking place that are all independent of each other, with their own characters, that would be a great formula for your style of writing. Almost like the show Love, Death, and Robots, but with a furry romantic twist.

Thank you very much. I plan to make this story a little bigger. But we'll see.