Ahhhhh, this is lovely! There's really a sweetness to this story.

this is really touching, I think you should expand on this story and create a whole universe :p

You’re not the only one to recommend that.

I have a running TF series, but a second couldn’t hurt… 😅

Heck, I completely agree. Really tugged at my heartstrings and my otherkin desires. I would adore more of this too, well done Eric!

Awww, this one's so wholesome. I can't <3

Such a cute and lovely story of two lovebirds x3

Really nice story!

Thanks Ryker!

Will there be a sequel?

I wrote it to be self contained with the possibility of a continuation. Although it seems to have done well enough that I think a sequel would be fun to write!

Super 👍🏼

This was a lovely story! It was a really cool concept how the transformation worked, and I kind of enjoyed how you incorporated the fairy tale in to it all. This did a good job of being a stand-alone story while also leaving plenty of room for a sequel. I am curious to see if the other gryphons are upset about how things happened or if they will be more interested in being less-secretive so they can also go through the same thing. Finally, I think you did a great job with the NSFW part. I'm used to seeing more detail in that, but I'm also used to reading things from people that exclusively write that stuff. It was more than I was expecting, and I found it to be pleasing.

Glad to hear you liked it!

I agree that continuing it would be fun. Lots of possibilities left open!

Never expected you to do mythological TFs - nice one!

Some kind folks online got the idea of doing one going in my head.

Fun change of pace!

i enjoyed reading this!

cleo mentioned there being a local group. meeting her "avian associates" could be either a fun time or a source of plot for a sequel.

Haha yeah, I figure there would have to be quite a few in a small community. Don’t think it would quite be a single home though 😉

in real life, when i'm meeting the local furs and gotta let someone know i won't be around but don't want them knowing i'm a furry, i say i'm meeting the "bowling group." they do end up going bowling quite a bit though, so it works great as a cover-up. maybe a similar group that does one thing a lot but it isn't really the main reason why they're all together?

That’s a great idea. I envision it as a group of multiple family’s of gryphons meeting in larger events or like you said, smaller groups getting together semi often.

interesting TF, a loving couple, and that. But a little criticism, related to the "legend/history" when she talks about it or half explains... The first time is okay, it's an introduction for him, the second time, when he can't be human anymore, it seemed to me something artificial.

After the first confirmation, that he is "blessed" to be able to be a griffin, it was already confirmed that this "story" was real. After that he is remiss on his part to tell that last detail, to ask if "is that what he wants and he is willing to continue being his partner" would be the right thing to do.

Yeah, I will admit it was meant as a one off the was continued. So it not as grounded as it could have been. Im just a bit too far to go back though.

I appreciate the criticism though! I think it certainly could have been better.

Well, you can't change things anymore, but I wanted to express my opinion. It is easy to praise a job, but I did not see any comments "pointing out" some point for improvement.

Well, if it's a simple plot for an erotic story, I wouldn't start making these kinds of comments. It seemed that he wanted to give a little more depth, so I "pointed out" something that had not been commented.

Well, cheers and have a good time.

I meant it honestly when I said thanks. Sorry if that came across poorly. I do actually appreciate the feedback and I wanted you to know that.

Good critique like yours is not entirely common on this site.