Sounds very nice. I like the lyrics, they do carry a message that I feel is important, and the way you've executed the piece is really just brilliant.
I like the contrasts between the soft and fluid melodious instruments and the sharper and deeper percussion.
The little sound effects I hear really adds a lot to the piece - somewhat unexpected, but they really work wonders.

I wish I could give you a better comment, but songs are a bit out of my league.

Any comment is welcome! Too much Christian music focuses entirely heavenward, ignoring the world around it. Much of my music aims to fill that void and make Christians more aware of their responsibility to the world they believe they've been put here to tend.

Mmmm, this is an interesting song. Good to hear some new stuff from you.

Glad you like it! :}