it has a nice melody. I also like what you did with the drums and the bass is good. will you be adding the vocal version when its done?

I have a trip-hop instrumental song out if you wanna listen to it. You could even use it for lyrics if your ever up to it. ^^

I have a vocal version, but it is not of sufficient quality at this time. I recorded it like the week after MFF. The final version will be on The Furst Album...

This is good mood music. I like how you continueally added more to the music as it progressed. Perhaps increase the volume on the synth horns (or was it something else? My sound font knowledge had faded with memory) in the middle of the tune when it plays a solo, then ebb it back into the background again when the solo is over =] You can also increase the music from piano to forte and back again when you have those moments towards the end. I'd like to hear this with the vocal as well.

Excellent ideas, and thanks a bunch for the constructive comment! There's quite a bit I hope to accomplish with the vocals in this one... heck, it's a song about post-con depression.