It's quite stylish , but those singular saturated lines at the edges are quite unsual . Their colors don't quite match the rest of the surface. This could make sense on a metalic surface where a different color could be focused like that, but I feel like this isn't what you're aiming for , so it should be a bit more similar to the surrounding colors. But that's just my opinion. This might work for you, and in that case, pay me no mind.

The coloring was intentional, just something I wanted to try here. Thanks for your input, though.