This ending is considered non-canon, but considering what happens in Chapter 6, I thought some might enjoy a gentler alternative.
Now, I've never done vore before, and it isn't my "thing", so I'm not entirely sure what notes to hit. Pointers and guidance in this matter is more than welcome: tell me how I did, what I missed, what you liked, etc.
Or if you know someone who does like vore, go ahead and point this out to them. I won't mind.
Now, I've never done vore before, and it isn't my "thing", so I'm not entirely sure what notes to hit. Pointers and guidance in this matter is more than welcome: tell me how I did, what I missed, what you liked, etc.
Or if you know someone who does like vore, go ahead and point this out to them. I won't mind.
Category Story / Vore
Species Panda
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 9.2 kB
Phew, I got done with this one first, saving the original ending for last. I apologize, I do apologize, but I had trouble focusing by the end of it. I DO KNOW I SAID YOU HAVE AN INCREDIBLE TALENT WRITING, and that you really do, but not even a master can fully keep my attention for around 50 pages of text.... But I do assure you, you've made me read so much text and that is amazing on so many levels.... we'll see, maybe I like the original ending better....
I underline: I read this because a friend of mine (big fat fur fan) wanted me to. He was shocked by the ending and hence probably wanted to see me give my opinion on it. It's a shame it took me 2 years to read this. By this point this leaves him cool and he's like "<shrug> whatever! Heh"
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