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Holy crap, I'm posting something?!
Heh.. yep. This is a story I've been wanting to do for a while, based around what
eachom had drawn for myself and 
rodent.
Yeah, I'm aware that the original image is supposed to be a market, but I said based AROUND it, not derived from it completely. ;3
So, be warned: Contains unwilling human prey, what could be considered zombification, a couple of 'not-so-clean', shady refferences, a bit of not-too-descriptive TF, and quite a bit of yammering... For a little flavor, such as the type that I'm actually telling the story, rather than you just reading it.
Credits:
Thumbnail, original artist, and partial credit to
Soul victim, original commission, and partial credit to
Story to me.
Heh.. yep. This is a story I've been wanting to do for a while, based around what
eachom had drawn for myself and 
rodent.Yeah, I'm aware that the original image is supposed to be a market, but I said based AROUND it, not derived from it completely. ;3
So, be warned: Contains unwilling human prey, what could be considered zombification, a couple of 'not-so-clean', shady refferences, a bit of not-too-descriptive TF, and quite a bit of yammering... For a little flavor, such as the type that I'm actually telling the story, rather than you just reading it.
Credits:
Thumbnail, original artist, and partial credit to
Soul victim, original commission, and partial credit to
Story to me.
Category Story / Vore
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 18.9 kB
*squeaks and giggles*
Heh. Sorry for the slow reply, but blizzards, power outages and being way too busy kept me occupied the past few days.
I really like how this came out. A wonderful interpretation of the picture. :D
I enjoyed the 1st person perspective, as that wonderfully captured your sinister nature in how much you enjoy simply devouring others.
Disposing of the human worked beautifully, pacing it rather well and not stretching it out for too long. Your uncaring reaction to his pleading and struggles, fit in perfectly to the mood of the scene.
And of course, I love the encounter with the rodent. ;) <3
The bit of casual banter between the two does a nice job at softening the mood and giving a sense of safety, only to have it all come apart in an instant when you just as casually, and without warning or cause, slurp out his soul, simply because you felt like it. :D
Transforming yourself to look like the rodent was a wonderful touch. Not only as a method of fooling the police, but also because I've always had a thing for evil doppelgangers and similar 'twins', and seeing you like that at the end just gave it a more devilishly fun ending. :)
Thanks for taking the time to write this up, and include an inspirational rat, being dealt with in a way that he'd tell you he loved... had he survived long enough to do so. ;)
Heh. Sorry for the slow reply, but blizzards, power outages and being way too busy kept me occupied the past few days.
I really like how this came out. A wonderful interpretation of the picture. :D
I enjoyed the 1st person perspective, as that wonderfully captured your sinister nature in how much you enjoy simply devouring others.
Disposing of the human worked beautifully, pacing it rather well and not stretching it out for too long. Your uncaring reaction to his pleading and struggles, fit in perfectly to the mood of the scene.
And of course, I love the encounter with the rodent. ;) <3
The bit of casual banter between the two does a nice job at softening the mood and giving a sense of safety, only to have it all come apart in an instant when you just as casually, and without warning or cause, slurp out his soul, simply because you felt like it. :D
Transforming yourself to look like the rodent was a wonderful touch. Not only as a method of fooling the police, but also because I've always had a thing for evil doppelgangers and similar 'twins', and seeing you like that at the end just gave it a more devilishly fun ending. :)
Thanks for taking the time to write this up, and include an inspirational rat, being dealt with in a way that he'd tell you he loved... had he survived long enough to do so. ;)
*grins toothily*
Heh, that's fine, no need to apologize. It's not like you have control over the weather. :P
And, I'm glad that you love it so! It's nice to see my stories go so well appreciated. *grin*
Heh, this sort of 1st-person view in these sort of stories were something I'd seen seldom done, if ever. I thought it would be a good experiment, which it apparently is.
I innicially didn't even plan the last bit of the story, but as it continued on... it seemed more than appropiate. Glad to see that you love the whole story so much! <3
And.. heh.. he's sure welcome. ;9
Heh, that's fine, no need to apologize. It's not like you have control over the weather. :P
And, I'm glad that you love it so! It's nice to see my stories go so well appreciated. *grin*
Heh, this sort of 1st-person view in these sort of stories were something I'd seen seldom done, if ever. I thought it would be a good experiment, which it apparently is.
I innicially didn't even plan the last bit of the story, but as it continued on... it seemed more than appropiate. Glad to see that you love the whole story so much! <3
And.. heh.. he's sure welcome. ;9
*smiles* Indeed. If us rats ever gain control over the weather, you are all doomed. ;)
The best elements of a story are often those that you didn't anticipate when you started writing. Allowing the story to go in its own direction is always fun to see where it will take you. :)
And I agree that stories from the pred's point of view are far too rare, especially when the pred has so much fun. :)
The best elements of a story are often those that you didn't anticipate when you started writing. Allowing the story to go in its own direction is always fun to see where it will take you. :)
And I agree that stories from the pred's point of view are far too rare, especially when the pred has so much fun. :)
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