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Chapter 3: Mayday - Specialist, do you copy? Specialist, respond!
A bit of a dull chapter, really. I'm hoping the next one is a touch more exciting as I've got something big planned for it. Regardless, I appreciate you simply having looked at this one.
Making slow but steady progress on all three of my personal projects. A new hope of mine is to prepare a chapter or pixel art to share each week but I know me and my laziness, short attention span, laziness, desire to keep up with others' projects, laziness, and self-consciousness will likely hinder that goal. Well, impossible goals are all the more exciting to work toward, right?
A bit of a dull chapter, really. I'm hoping the next one is a touch more exciting as I've got something big planned for it. Regardless, I appreciate you simply having looked at this one.
Making slow but steady progress on all three of my personal projects. A new hope of mine is to prepare a chapter or pixel art to share each week but I know me and my laziness, short attention span, laziness, desire to keep up with others' projects, laziness, and self-consciousness will likely hinder that goal. Well, impossible goals are all the more exciting to work toward, right?
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I think it's ok that not much happened during this. Showing the passage of time on the trip was necessary and a single chapter like this works well. I will say the only thing that doesn't seem entirely realistic about this whole series (although it isn't really a problem) is just that they sent a single person crew. I would at least expect two or three people on board. A minor nitpick though.
I just worried that this one didn't even do anything for exposition, but thought that the passage of time for Grace's mission was relevant. Probably could have been done better by getting a little psychological on Grace's mental state, but I've never been sent on a mission to Mars before so I don't really have any experience to pull from. Also, I understand and agree that a single person crew doesn't make a lot of sense, I just didn't think of anything on that front to include.
I'm grateful for your thoughts on how this is going, thank you very much for that and reading through this one.
I'm grateful for your thoughts on how this is going, thank you very much for that and reading through this one.
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