This is lovely so far. The only thing that strkes me as a bit off is the iris "rods" should be larger closer to us than farther away, if that makes sense? It makes it look like the perspective is backwards when you look at that one part as opposed to the rest of it.

Ah, you mean the grain of the cornea, the colored portion? I keep skewing the shape of the eye in my mind as a bowl shape rather than something slightly conic... gotta keep that in mind. Thanks for the reminder!

You're welcome! And yes, the colored part of the eye, all those little green rod shaped thingummies. :) So yeah, if you make them a little bigger closer to the viewer, and thing them down the farther they go away from the viewer, that should fix the "mirrored Perspective" thing. Like, if you cover up everything in the pic except for the center of the eye, it looks like it's looking the opposite direction. That might help you see what I'm talking about. I'm. . . So descriptive, aren't I? Lol Hope it helps!

I got what you said initially, you did a good job of describing it-- it helps a lot. Thanks! <3

Oh good! *Relieved* I'm glad I could help. ^_^ You're very welcome. ^_^ Sometimes I think I sound more retarded than I actually do, though usually I just sound retarded. ^_^;;;

She pretty much caught it... other than that... the eyelashes are very uniform... I know mine at least come in different lengths... dunno if that was the effect you were going for though. Beautiful job!

Yeah, I'm considering'em placeholders for now... have a look at the update for this I submitted earlier, it's lookin' a lot better. :3