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a work in progress shot of a print im doing... crits and comments are more than welcome! :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Panda
Size 1200 x 800px
File Size 135.2 kB
thanks! actually, i used dilios for the crossover, because the original concept of hunho (my OC) had a bandana just like his xD (and he was missing an eye too) so i just thought it would be nice to have him back like that XD
and about the toga; yeah, i read that somewhere, but i still wanted to have the feeling from the movie... i just fucking loved 300 xD
and about the toga; yeah, i read that somewhere, but i still wanted to have the feeling from the movie... i just fucking loved 300 xD
Minor critique, there are a lot of spots that seem lit arbitrarily. For instance, the main character's hand, where the spear's shadow would fall.
Shadows are blurred around objects that don't conform with the light, several of the spears for instance along the front of the formation.
The blood on the hand in front makes it somewhat obvious that you used a lot of different brushes to get the bloodsplatter as it doesn't quite splatter evenly like that on non-flat surfaces.
But great job so far. The contrast and the palette and tones are superb.
Shadows are blurred around objects that don't conform with the light, several of the spears for instance along the front of the formation.
The blood on the hand in front makes it somewhat obvious that you used a lot of different brushes to get the bloodsplatter as it doesn't quite splatter evenly like that on non-flat surfaces.
But great job so far. The contrast and the palette and tones are superb.
thanks for the critique!
i wouldn't have noticed the shadows around the objects, if you hadn't told me. i think it may be my monitor being too dark now...
i don't quite get what you mean here, tho; could you please exlpain further? : )
there are a lot of spots that seem lit arbitrarily. For instance, the main character's hand, where the spear's shadow would fall.
also, yeah, i used a set of brushes for the blood, was trying some ideas and i liked how they looked, but yeah, seems too obvious...
they look quite flat now that you mention it.. XD guess i'll have them cleaned up and render some of the splatters by hand...
i wouldn't have noticed the shadows around the objects, if you hadn't told me. i think it may be my monitor being too dark now...
i don't quite get what you mean here, tho; could you please exlpain further? : )
there are a lot of spots that seem lit arbitrarily. For instance, the main character's hand, where the spear's shadow would fall.
also, yeah, i used a set of brushes for the blood, was trying some ideas and i liked how they looked, but yeah, seems too obvious...
they look quite flat now that you mention it.. XD guess i'll have them cleaned up and render some of the splatters by hand...
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