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Hey, there!
So this is the first story (or text sequence, rather) that I'm posting online, involving PAW Patrol's Rubble having the munchies on Skye.
I believe this represents my style pretty well:
I tend to skip anything that has to do the story and any kind of specific context, and I like to focus on the action itself, no outside or story distractions, at good detail (you be the judge).
Let me know what you guys think and enjoy!
So this is the first story (or text sequence, rather) that I'm posting online, involving PAW Patrol's Rubble having the munchies on Skye.
I believe this represents my style pretty well:
I tend to skip anything that has to do the story and any kind of specific context, and I like to focus on the action itself, no outside or story distractions, at good detail (you be the judge).
Let me know what you guys think and enjoy!
Category Story / Vore
Species Dog (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 3.7 kB
Thanks for your comment! And yeah, we need more work done around paw patrol, there just isn't enough! lol
About this having little to no story, I do agree that it would have spiced it up quite a bit. Thing is, I wanted to try a minimal style tale, since I like to come up with vore sequences like this, without story, reason or even dialogue, bringing focus straight to the action (woo-hoo! XD); so you basically think of it as a wireframe- hence my username checks out hehe, it's basically my style.
That said, I do plan on writing more stuff with a little more story on it to drive the action, maybe full stories. It would definitely have some more focus in the prey's peril an despair (screaming for help, "LET ME OOOUT!!" maybe brying, that stuff), and maybe pred interaction and a proper context. Like you said, a good line of interaction does give the story a lot of substance.
But I'm also keen on adding some wireframe stories like this one too. I think it's a good offering for those like me who like to skip the whole contextualized setup and jump straight to the good stuff :3.
When the time comes I'll have my profile updated with the content ranking to indicate wither it's a wireframe sequence, a full story, or in between.
Again, thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked it!
About this having little to no story, I do agree that it would have spiced it up quite a bit. Thing is, I wanted to try a minimal style tale, since I like to come up with vore sequences like this, without story, reason or even dialogue, bringing focus straight to the action (woo-hoo! XD); so you basically think of it as a wireframe- hence my username checks out hehe, it's basically my style.
That said, I do plan on writing more stuff with a little more story on it to drive the action, maybe full stories. It would definitely have some more focus in the prey's peril an despair (screaming for help, "LET ME OOOUT!!" maybe brying, that stuff), and maybe pred interaction and a proper context. Like you said, a good line of interaction does give the story a lot of substance.
But I'm also keen on adding some wireframe stories like this one too. I think it's a good offering for those like me who like to skip the whole contextualized setup and jump straight to the good stuff :3.
When the time comes I'll have my profile updated with the content ranking to indicate wither it's a wireframe sequence, a full story, or in between.
Again, thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked it!
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