Fascinating. As for feedback, I'll say that even though I like it and it seems you're trying to paint your character as varying in personality, I wish the structure would be somewhat more uniform.
Was there not supposed to be a pattern of which lines you start with "I am"? I don't think it's over-used, just used sporadically. The 3-4-4-4-3 line stanzas have good symmetry, though I don't see any overall rhyme scheme connecting them.
I'm semi-rambling and don't have any right to be criticizing, but you wanted review, so thar it is.

Actually your semi-rambling is very helpful.
He actually does vary in personality much as I myself do. Originally I wanted it to sound very much like a miniature epic with a somewhat uniform structure. This unfortunately didn't quite happen all the way through. Actually the only intended pattern is through speech its supposed to rhyme slightly and roll off the tongue somewhat. The rhythme unfortunately also suffered somewhat as inspiration came and went.
Thank you for the feedback. So few people seem willing to give feedback these days.

AnthonyM~

more likely they're too lazy to read. XP

and that man is really cool