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A friend's aid
Georga is crushed by what happened with Oxidus. Can Volt cheer her up? Can Spyro or Cynder do anything? Will Georga be happy again or will she be sad until Oxidus lifts out of his depression?
This is the first chapter that I have written while having a betareader and I think it really shows. My betareader doesn't do much on spelling or grammer so mistakes can still be in those things.
I think this chapter went very well. The emotion were not easy to put in but I think that I succeded. Also hints are giving for the new direction my story will take.
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Georga is crushed by what happened with Oxidus. Can Volt cheer her up? Can Spyro or Cynder do anything? Will Georga be happy again or will she be sad until Oxidus lifts out of his depression?
This is the first chapter that I have written while having a betareader and I think it really shows. My betareader doesn't do much on spelling or grammer so mistakes can still be in those things.
I think this chapter went very well. The emotion were not easy to put in but I think that I succeded. Also hints are giving for the new direction my story will take.
next: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5289159
prev: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5179602/
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 75 kB
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