FA+
Shop
12086
Views
Views
118
Favorites
Favorites
Category
All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1294 x 2000
File Size 1.44 MB
Report this content
★
More from phrannd
< Prior Page - Next Page >
Something magical.
There are 4 additional pages available early on my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Phrannd
Overstay now has its own webpage: https://overstaycomic.com/ Read the full comic there a bit more comfortably
I have some twitters where I sometimes post stuff SFW: https://twitter.com/phrannd NSFW https://twitter.com/phranndjob
Something magical.
There are 4 additional pages available early on my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Phrannd
Overstay now has its own webpage: https://overstaycomic.com/ Read the full comic there a bit more comfortably
I have some twitters where I sometimes post stuff SFW: https://twitter.com/phrannd NSFW https://twitter.com/phranndjob
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1294 x 2000px
File Size 1.44 MB
I approve of your approach here. I’ve seen it happen sometimes when a new character is introduced part way into a story, the author puts in some dialogue that’s just for the reader and not for the story, and it’s feels out of place. This way of first showing, as a first step to building up to who they are, is better.
Comments