His friend means well. You can overdo it.

And I'd probably laugh at that anime. Menimienai-nushi wa renzoku baka no chikaku ni hana o sakasemasu sounds like a fun one.

I hope, I can do well.

Oh, this is cool! You've got the pdf set up as if it were really a submitted manuscript for a film plot line, very killer idea! Let's get into the details and read all the panel summaries.

I love the main character's name, Max Braun. His last name is pronounced the same as as the word Brawn, which means to be strong, so I'm sure you knew about this and cleverly chose his name for that reason, hehe. The gym scene seems hot on it's own, hopefully we can get some good screen time on some of those pumped up bodies, especially those carved otter abdominals.

Haha, great move with the little bit of water from his bottle missing his mouth and falling all over his t-shirt. I'm sure wet t-shirt competition fans are going to adore this scene. All well placed mischief so far!

The hugging scene between Max and Rodney is cute and very endearing, you show the audience the true nature of their relationship here.

I'm curious about how Max seems to be nervous about accepting Rodney's advances. I think this would be a central part of the plot, where Max slowly opens up to and accepts Rodney as his partner?

To be honest, I wasn't even thinking along those lines. But I think I might even be able to expand the scenario of this comic a bit.

*laughs... yes I would watch that anime... Nicely done Werty...

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