Impossible to categorise image is impossible.
I left the sketch lines in to emphasise some features of the image, I feel I need to figure out a way of being able to do away with them entirely...
Anyway, IF YOU SEE THIS IMAGE PLEASE COMMENT! I kinda hate getting no feedback on a picture, I need to know what I'm doing wrong/right :x
Sketch commissions opening soon probably!
I left the sketch lines in to emphasise some features of the image, I feel I need to figure out a way of being able to do away with them entirely...
Anyway, IF YOU SEE THIS IMAGE PLEASE COMMENT! I kinda hate getting no feedback on a picture, I need to know what I'm doing wrong/right :x
Sketch commissions opening soon probably!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Lizard
Size 993 x 946px
File Size 518 kB
Personally, I don't feel leaving in the sketch lines takes anything away from the picture, and it may look a little... Odd without any lines at all? Haven't much more to add other than what I said before; that you seem to have settled on a definite look for her has helped a lot! :)
The only thing I could pick at would be her tail seems to raise a little too much too soon, though I'll be perfectly honest and admit I've no idea if thats a valid criticism. X) Plus, who's looking at her -tail-? 8D
The only thing I could pick at would be her tail seems to raise a little too much too soon, though I'll be perfectly honest and admit I've no idea if thats a valid criticism. X) Plus, who's looking at her -tail-? 8D
Arms seem just a liiiiittle short, core shadows under her left arm (between boob) don't seem dark enough, same goes for her right forearm and I think that the boobs should cast more shadow on her belly; I'm guessing light source is to her front, at around eye level?
Don't think there's anything else, other than that! I might be wrong, it's just what I'm thinkin, heh
Oh and subject is A-OK!! :DD
Don't think there's anything else, other than that! I might be wrong, it's just what I'm thinkin, heh
Oh and subject is A-OK!! :DD
Well, you asked for critique. Who am I to argue?
The first thing I noticed is that she has no pupils. Is that intentional? Also, her frill things on the back of her head are not showing much shading on my monitor, and as such they look very flat. It's jarring, mainly because the rest of the image has very, very beautiful shading.
As Talash said, I really don't think that removing the sketch lines will help anything, and it provides a nice amount of resolution and detail when left in. You might want to toy around with replacing them with inked lines, but there definitely needs to be something; your style of shading isn't extreme enough to provide enough contrast to pick out internal definition, I think.
The first thing I noticed is that she has no pupils. Is that intentional? Also, her frill things on the back of her head are not showing much shading on my monitor, and as such they look very flat. It's jarring, mainly because the rest of the image has very, very beautiful shading.
As Talash said, I really don't think that removing the sketch lines will help anything, and it provides a nice amount of resolution and detail when left in. You might want to toy around with replacing them with inked lines, but there definitely needs to be something; your style of shading isn't extreme enough to provide enough contrast to pick out internal definition, I think.
But the only way I can properly comment is if I can get my face between those big beautiful blue breasts of yours.
On a serious note, I can't really give you proper feedback as I am not an artist, but as a viewer's (and fapper's, just kidding. :3) standpoint, I think the sketchlines contribute to the unique style of the picture.
Oh, and lizard melons.
On a serious note, I can't really give you proper feedback as I am not an artist, but as a viewer's (and fapper's, just kidding. :3) standpoint, I think the sketchlines contribute to the unique style of the picture.
Oh, and lizard melons.
Honestly, this coloring style seems much better for your particular style. I'm actually extremely impressed by how you can show a 3-dimensional shape with such minimal shading. I say keep trying with this style, but do experiment with other styles as well. After all, practice makes as close to perfect as one can get. I do truly enjoy your work. And not just for the sexy lizard tits, either.
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