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Or is it just me? lol
And sorry for the bad edit, I'm much better drawing with photoshop than... photoshopping.
And sorry for the bad edit, I'm much better drawing with photoshop than... photoshopping.
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I dunno about that. Bee's design seems to be getting some heavy criticism. There's been a lot said about how vibrant, confusing, and overwhelming the design is. With many fans calling her an "exaggerated sparkle dog". As well as how it doesn't quite match the idea of 'gluttony' (The queen of gluttony looks like she's bulimic.)
For what it's worth, I sort of agree. Bee is a bit of a messy design, and feels kinda one note when compared to the complexity of Loona. This episode in general felt messy and had some real clunkers in terms of writing. You can tell it had some rough and tough edits.
For what it's worth, I sort of agree. Bee is a bit of a messy design, and feels kinda one note when compared to the complexity of Loona. This episode in general felt messy and had some real clunkers in terms of writing. You can tell it had some rough and tough edits.
Well, one could sort of argue that 'gluttony' IS excessive and over-doing it, so maybe "exaggerated sparkle dog," and a messy design works.
But yes the writing was certainly clunky. I thought it would be a better follow up on Ozzie's but it barely addressed Blitz's feelings, apart from the binging and that one line at the end.
But yes the writing was certainly clunky. I thought it would be a better follow up on Ozzie's but it barely addressed Blitz's feelings, apart from the binging and that one line at the end.
Oh yeah. I can see that line of thought. But i also understand the validity from those who are leveling the criticism.
Personally speaking, my own criticisms against the episode is the clunky writing. I think my problem was that whenever Bee and Loona spoke to one another, it was like it was two completely different conversations in terms of dialog and reaction. It didn't make Loona likeable, and the flow of the conversations felt cheap and forced. I don’t even blame the voice actors, the dialogue just didn’t gel, it all felt like it was a bunch of different ideas sloppily mixed together, especially once Blitzo's situation was involved. They just came up with things that sounded good to the writer and put it together without checking if it works as a full conversation.
But anyway, that's just my two cents. ^^
Personally speaking, my own criticisms against the episode is the clunky writing. I think my problem was that whenever Bee and Loona spoke to one another, it was like it was two completely different conversations in terms of dialog and reaction. It didn't make Loona likeable, and the flow of the conversations felt cheap and forced. I don’t even blame the voice actors, the dialogue just didn’t gel, it all felt like it was a bunch of different ideas sloppily mixed together, especially once Blitzo's situation was involved. They just came up with things that sounded good to the writer and put it together without checking if it works as a full conversation.
But anyway, that's just my two cents. ^^
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