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This was a LONG overdue piece for 
Sciggles, where I had meant to meant to cheer her up. It's a little late, only about 10 months or so.... It's my... first real attempt at poetry, so don't expect the next Robert Frost... but all in all, I don't think it turned out too badly.
Dragoneer is
Sciggles is
Enjoy! :D
Sciggles, where I had meant to meant to cheer her up. It's a little late, only about 10 months or so.... It's my... first real attempt at poetry, so don't expect the next Robert Frost... but all in all, I don't think it turned out too badly.Dragoneer is
Sciggles is
Enjoy! :D
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You honestly don't know how hard it was to keep the rhyme as well as i did... when I said that this was my first time writing poetry, it wasn't a lie... I was so tempted to look up words, but then I was like "NO! IF I don't know it, then it's not the word I want!" but... at times... It was sooo difficult... but, maybe once I get better, things'll come in a little smoother? Thanks so very much for the fave and the helpful comments... though, what sentence was odd?
"Soft, caring eyes meet - theirs
Loneliness now deterred"
I always tend to make "theirs" in the second line whenever I try to read out the poem, but that is probably just me :P
I DO understand the difficulties in trying to keep the rhyme throughout the poetry. I tried. But with my limited English skills, I failed miserably! Yes I sure hope I can read your poems again in the future. You sure show a lot of potential in your first try!
Give yourself a pat on the shoulder :P
Loneliness now deterred"
I always tend to make "theirs" in the second line whenever I try to read out the poem, but that is probably just me :P
I DO understand the difficulties in trying to keep the rhyme throughout the poetry. I tried. But with my limited English skills, I failed miserably! Yes I sure hope I can read your poems again in the future. You sure show a lot of potential in your first try!
Give yourself a pat on the shoulder :P
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