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Well here it is; I've been working all vacation long on this as part of a trade between myself and Kenku. And what a whopper!!! 74 pages. I could hardly believe it when I finished writing it. I hope you like it Kenku. While I was working on it, I just got hit with the idea of making it a first person telling from the perspective of an old friend to our thief. So let me know how I did getting that across please? It's my first try at that perspective. Anyways, to the summary. Basically the idea is a thief discovers an artifact that allows him to tf into a fox at will, but as time goes on, it gets harder and harder to change back. I hope you enjoy the story cause that's all I'm gonna tell ya! :P You'll have to read to find the rest. I really wanted to get the character development right in this too. So let me know what you think and please be as specific as you can. But most of all, ENJOY!!!!!! :D
Oh, and I nearly forgot. I got the inspiration for the name from the thief in Oceans 13. I do not own that character and am not using said name for profit. There, legal disclaimer is now complete. Enjoy the story!
Oh, and I nearly forgot. I got the inspiration for the name from the thief in Oceans 13. I do not own that character and am not using said name for profit. There, legal disclaimer is now complete. Enjoy the story!
Category Story / Transformation
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File Size 187 kB
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*Mouth hangs open*
That, that my friend is, was, will be, amazing, cool, exciting and down right enjoyable.
Really enjoyed reading the story and getting to enjoy the pace, adventure and down right awesome plot line and twists. Very amazing and really well worth the time to read it.
*Mouth hangs open*
That, that my friend is, was, will be, amazing, cool, exciting and down right enjoyable.
Really enjoyed reading the story and getting to enjoy the pace, adventure and down right awesome plot line and twists. Very amazing and really well worth the time to read it.
considering it, but I'm not sure. I may just leave it up to the imagination of the reader. The idea in case you didn't catch it was that Lee was a descendant of the accolytes who knew about Setsuna's innocence. So I don't know if I'll write about what happens to him or not. But thanks for the commentary.
Absolutely amazing read ^_^ the length of it was well used and I loved every minute of so that equals a total of about 2 hours of paradise xD
Very well written and just overall a wonderful story ^^
I have to admit when I read the part with the bear trap I chuckled because I wrote a fox tf story with a bear trap in it as well XD butine was nothing compares to this, ack I must stop soon before I overload this box with praise ^^
Very well written and just overall a wonderful story ^^
I have to admit when I read the part with the bear trap I chuckled because I wrote a fox tf story with a bear trap in it as well XD butine was nothing compares to this, ack I must stop soon before I overload this box with praise ^^
LOL thanks shadow. I'm glad to see that you enjoyed my story. I figured it was time that our hunter had a taste of his own medicine for a change. Too many innocent creatures are killed or mortally wounded by traps like that. I'm also glad taht i was able to fill that two hours with fun. As for praise, you didn't overload the box. And I can't wait to see what works you've created. Tf is something I love to write about and I have a talent for it. I think I may even try to write a novel soon though tf in it will be limited, there should be much action and magic and just plain awesomeness!!! Once I finish hashing out the details for it anyways.
Yeah I agree it's a real shame when that happens, those animals never deserve it :(
As for my works they aren't that good, I'm really just began to dabble into story writing so I'm definitely not the best, but I do the best I can with it at least ^^
And A WHOLE NOVEL!!!!!! ^_^ that sounds very exciting and I hope it does work out well for you. I don't really care about the tf being limited as long as it is exciting to read, I usually get through it all so I'd say go for it ^^
As for my works they aren't that good, I'm really just began to dabble into story writing so I'm definitely not the best, but I do the best I can with it at least ^^
And A WHOLE NOVEL!!!!!! ^_^ that sounds very exciting and I hope it does work out well for you. I don't really care about the tf being limited as long as it is exciting to read, I usually get through it all so I'd say go for it ^^
thanks, and Shadow, you shouldn't belittle your skills. I've only been writing for a little over a year and a half now and I've grown a lot in that short time. I'm sure it'll be the same for you. Sadly, I can't read your rich text file until I have my own computer. I'm using my parents at the moment, so my reading of your works will have to wait til April. *sigh* And yeah, I hope to write and finish it within the next few years, but I still need to come up with how the world will look and what kind of races and religions there might be involved in it, etc. I can say that it will involve dragons and plenty of action.
I can't because I'd have to download the file to read it and I can't do that unless it's from a trusted source that my parents approve of. Otherwise it's very easy for spyware and the like to come through and ruin the computer. So while I'm at home, I try to keep away form that sort of hting unless it's necessary.
Well the Mac for one cannot get viruses and is a really strong computer really good with a Internet connection and doesn't really seem to slow down. On te other hand it cannot run flash, you will probably need to buy te Mac versions of Word and other Microsoft products and a lot of online games if you play them are not Mac compatible, plus they are very expensive. My family owns our laptop but when I get my own I think it won't be a Mac but if you can afford it I'd say it's worth it.
Well depending on the part in the bible you're reading you do want to fall asleep. Numbers is soooooooooooo dry! I'm struggling to get through it and back to the actual good stuff again. Also I have found in my experience that it really does help me to fall asleep when I read something in bed. So I figured why not do something involving the religion I mentioned in the beginning? Also, thanks for teh compliment. I hope you enjoyed it. As I said above, it's the first time I've ever tried a tf from the first person.
Well, Joshua makes Rambo and Braveheart look like sissy girls. So only a little longer.
And the first person is NOT the on TF-ing.
This would make an epic movie!
Questions:
Can I try to adapt this to a screenplay?
Should I expand The Tale of Inari into a longer length than just a four part narrative?
And the first person is NOT the on TF-ing.
This would make an epic movie!
Questions:
Can I try to adapt this to a screenplay?
Should I expand The Tale of Inari into a longer length than just a four part narrative?
Um ... can you clarify what you meant by "and the first person is NOT the on TF-ing?" I don't get your meaning. As for adapting this for a screen play, I think it'd be alright by me, but you need to talk to Kenku about it too. This was a gift story for him and Kenku is his character, even if I did put him in a different light than what he really is. As for the Tale of Inari, I haven't been able to read it since I'm at home right now. I can't download documents onto my parents' computer because of possible viral infection. But I'll be able to read them when I get out to school in just a little over a couple more weeks.
No, but I have written two complete screenplays, two pilot episodes, and I'm adapting one of my screenplays into a novel. (there's a TF-esque scene at the end of the first chapter, as far as DNA rewritting and, by extension, temporary halting of protein production which is PAINFULL!!!!)
Thank you for the superb story,if it were a book it woulde be with my other favorit writers,piers anthony,magret ball,anne mccaffery,mercedes lackey,and others.Once I started to read the story I could not put it down but read it all the way,now I must give you a fav and a watch.please more like this.
I'll see what I can do. I just got back from the mission though and I still need to readjust. I'll try to get my writing groove back on once I'm fully settled in and caught up on my classes. For now I'm at down time until I can meet with my professors or TAs to discuss what I missed and how I can catch up.
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