This one feels choppy in the middle to me...I really want to add something, or edit the flow >o<

suggestions would be most appreciated.


I do written commissions, also.

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I wish on stars

Most every night;

Even when clouds

Hide them from sight,

Because I know

They hear me still.

I always pick

My wishing flow'rs

And never miss

My Wishing hours

Because I need

To know that I

Tried even the

Ridiculous

In loving you.