I read the story of Deored and was very impressed by the ghostly ending. This was beautiful - but still, a kind of scary when you lost someone who you love and lived together for so much time.
(Also, you can find Deored's story here. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/51530094/ Part one.)
I would like to ask for a picture where old Mark and Madeline are sitting on the veranda of their house, ...and Seth kindly made it for me.
They lived happily all their lives together, they did different things, and they did a lot. And now they decided that they were so very tired and distanced themselves from the affairs of the family, resting and taking care of each other.
Their beginning small family is really huge now. Their children are grown up and have their own partners, people that Mark and Maddy don't remember sometimes walking around the house, from time to time and greeting them politely, and a large crowd of little vixens of various ages sometimes run up to them asking for candy.
"So much time has passed..." Mark said quietly.
"Yeah. I'm even kind of scared." Madeline answered in a low whisper, when a very tall young-looking blue-haired elegant vixen, whom the couple could not remember, (Cindy's older daughter) approached the couple and greeted them very politely almost bowing her head. The elegant woman held a small cheerful child in her arms, who staring intently at them with her small eyes, a child she called Mark and Madeline's GREAT-GRANDDAUGHTER, causing the couple to swallow nervously and look at each other old faces.
Mark is already an old man with long thin snow-white hair (sometimes left it loose without a ponytail), he has lost a little weight, while his Madeline is a gray-haired round plump woman dotted with her old blue tint in some places.
Mark often takes a nap, and from time to time when the man wakes up he strokes his wife's hand or pats his wife's thigh, which makes Madeline wake up and smile happily at him.
The children also see how Mark can sometimes turn his head and whisper something in his wife's ear, which makes Madeline's ears stand up and the woman starts giggling quietly. Remembering her old times.
***
As you can imagine, Maddie and Mark do seem like they would be happy at that point in their life. Grand and great-grandkids running around and Mark making naughty comments to his wife.
Maybe they are old - but internally they have not realized this.
***
Also please note that my story is in the process of being written, and most of these small fragments that I published are not in chronological order.
(Chronology always was a real pain for me.) So when I finish my plans I will try to put everything in order. If I can...
The story and all characters belong to me
Marksan
The wonderful drawings and most of character desighn are kindly made for me by
sethtriggs For which I am very grateful for his help in portraying all this - because without his vision and pictures I would never have been able to tell this story. He really did a lot for me.
Thank you for the idea
Deored
We still have "Tales of Chakona Discord for fans" - a cozy place where we usually gather. But after the recent ...flooding infestation, the rules were changed slightly. So ask around for an invite PM.
I am nice with talking to people. I swear. )))
(Also, you can find Deored's story here. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/51530094/ Part one.)
I would like to ask for a picture where old Mark and Madeline are sitting on the veranda of their house, ...and Seth kindly made it for me.
They lived happily all their lives together, they did different things, and they did a lot. And now they decided that they were so very tired and distanced themselves from the affairs of the family, resting and taking care of each other.
Their beginning small family is really huge now. Their children are grown up and have their own partners, people that Mark and Maddy don't remember sometimes walking around the house, from time to time and greeting them politely, and a large crowd of little vixens of various ages sometimes run up to them asking for candy.
"So much time has passed..." Mark said quietly.
"Yeah. I'm even kind of scared." Madeline answered in a low whisper, when a very tall young-looking blue-haired elegant vixen, whom the couple could not remember, (Cindy's older daughter) approached the couple and greeted them very politely almost bowing her head. The elegant woman held a small cheerful child in her arms, who staring intently at them with her small eyes, a child she called Mark and Madeline's GREAT-GRANDDAUGHTER, causing the couple to swallow nervously and look at each other old faces.
Mark is already an old man with long thin snow-white hair (sometimes left it loose without a ponytail), he has lost a little weight, while his Madeline is a gray-haired round plump woman dotted with her old blue tint in some places.
Mark often takes a nap, and from time to time when the man wakes up he strokes his wife's hand or pats his wife's thigh, which makes Madeline wake up and smile happily at him.
The children also see how Mark can sometimes turn his head and whisper something in his wife's ear, which makes Madeline's ears stand up and the woman starts giggling quietly. Remembering her old times.
***
As you can imagine, Maddie and Mark do seem like they would be happy at that point in their life. Grand and great-grandkids running around and Mark making naughty comments to his wife.
Maybe they are old - but internally they have not realized this.
***
Also please note that my story is in the process of being written, and most of these small fragments that I published are not in chronological order.
(Chronology always was a real pain for me.) So when I finish my plans I will try to put everything in order. If I can...
The story and all characters belong to me
MarksanThe wonderful drawings and most of character desighn are kindly made for me by
sethtriggs For which I am very grateful for his help in portraying all this - because without his vision and pictures I would never have been able to tell this story. He really did a lot for me.Thank you for the idea
DeoredWe still have "Tales of Chakona Discord for fans" - a cozy place where we usually gather. But after the recent ...flooding infestation, the rules were changed slightly. So ask around for an invite PM.
I am nice with talking to people. I swear. )))
Category Artwork (Digital) / Portraits
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 700 x 700px
File Size 419 kB
So beautiful reading how bountiful their lives have become! And
Deored is a great inspiration!
Deored is a great inspiration!
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