Your twist endings are what makes your fics great, but this one was especially bittersweet. Ouch. I actually felt pain on that one... *deep sigh* Poor poor Donny.

(Just one error I'm loath to bring up "into a descent cluster." should be "decent" I believe. ^^)

Poor Don, will he ever get the girl of his dreams? Very nicely written.

R.

Thank you, guys!

And I'll fix that error, thanks. Now I just need to figure out how to edit submissions...

Hehe. 'Tis fixed. ^^;

O_O *mouth gapes like a fish on dry land* Oh man... poor Don!! *huggles the poor turtle*

Darn those twists of yours! ^_^ They are just so good and really disrupts the whole romatic atmosphere. I love it!! I really enjoy reading these fics of yours because I never know what to expect. Great job! ^_^