
Venus7: Revenge of the 8th Venus: The Survivor (18/25)
YES!!! I think she finally trashed that guy. Did Kabuki underestimate Ranger's attack taking it head on, literally (pun)? Or maybe he couldn't defend himself fast enough. Now he's having some sort of 'melt down' BOL (pun). Maybe she'll get those answers for you guys.
If you ask me, I think the Kabuki Warrior is a big baby and is faking it...
Stay tuned for the next.
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I'm very satisfied with the outcome of the colors. I actually took my time with this page. Having an organized schedule makes a big difference.
I know it may look like Celeste is looking to the right side of the page but she's actually looking in Ranger's direction. Sometimes it's difficult to place the pupils correctly when the eyes are small.
This is more of a self critique but I think it would have been best to make the blast higher, pushing the mushroom cloud at the top out of view. I'm still working on positioning the characters and scene better. Next time I'll pull the view back some more for a more dramatic effect because the explosion should have been a bit bigger. The top doesn't quite match the size of the cloud at the bottom.
Anyone have any helpful words of advice? I was looking to do something with the rings to give them movement and direction without using manga styled panel effects. Any suggestions?
If you ask me, I think the Kabuki Warrior is a big baby and is faking it...
Stay tuned for the next.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Artist Comments
I'm very satisfied with the outcome of the colors. I actually took my time with this page. Having an organized schedule makes a big difference.
I know it may look like Celeste is looking to the right side of the page but she's actually looking in Ranger's direction. Sometimes it's difficult to place the pupils correctly when the eyes are small.
This is more of a self critique but I think it would have been best to make the blast higher, pushing the mushroom cloud at the top out of view. I'm still working on positioning the characters and scene better. Next time I'll pull the view back some more for a more dramatic effect because the explosion should have been a bit bigger. The top doesn't quite match the size of the cloud at the bottom.
Anyone have any helpful words of advice? I was looking to do something with the rings to give them movement and direction without using manga styled panel effects. Any suggestions?
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I think you like the fact that she made him cry lol (kidding). I'm glad you like it. I still can't wait to get to the next chapter though. Hopefully there will be more explanation as to what's going on with the others. I don't know how long it's been since the start of this chapter. My guess is 5-10mins.? I guess it doesn't matter.
Thanks! :D
Thanks! :D
As a librarian once told me, "a comic is just a bunch of pictures on one page". I'm sure you'd do well. I think it's alright as long as you know of the story elements and you're an excellent writer so I know you're familiar with it.
What if you started small like a page with 4-6 panels in it? It could have a joke like in the funny papers. I'm thinking of doing that soon. Maybe we could make it a collab. We could both draw together or you could write the skits and I'll draw them. Whatever swirls your noodels lol (I'm tired of the "floats your boat" saying)
What if you started small like a page with 4-6 panels in it? It could have a joke like in the funny papers. I'm thinking of doing that soon. Maybe we could make it a collab. We could both draw together or you could write the skits and I'll draw them. Whatever swirls your noodels lol (I'm tired of the "floats your boat" saying)
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