This actually sounds incredibly good, especially knowing that it took you only 30 minutes! I feel it has a very good industrial style weight to it, that just really paints the mental image of the weight and monotony of a day, wearing down on someone! Like, I could easily see this as the part of a sound track in an early 2000s movie, either in an opening scene to show characters just barely tolerating going to work, or in a more humorous scene of characters (like a Jay and Silent Bob type), going door to door for some purpose over and over, and each time getting belittled and rejected. There's just something really right with the sound of this that conveys a certain futility that comes with depression, without being very cliche and overly sad. It's an unrelenting weight that's carrying on with its own thing, while being an immense burden with you, and your choices here really just tickle my neurons in the right way for that! You are very considerably talented! Great work!

Hey late as hell reply but just wanted to say thank you for this comment. I was in a really low place when I made this little thing as I had lost my job from a company wide layoff and I was filled with depression and anxiety trying to figure out what to do. I really didn't have a lot of support at the time and comments like this for even how small my audience on here is really helped me feel better. I don't think I'll ever be some kind of actual musical artist, like making money off of it, but I do love making music as best as I can and seeing this comment at the time lifted my spirits up a ton. I think you helped me focus a bit more on getting back into a good place and I am doing well enough now, not great but sustainable. I appreciate your comment and everyone else's nice words, so thank you!

It was my pleasure! You deserved every syllable!

Still a musical genius!

Me vibing to the bad time I’m having

This still goes hard as hell