Tyklo chapter 12
by Wolfbaine
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15 years ago
Tye is the school outcast. Alone and cut off from the rest of society, he enjoys the pleasures of being left alone. Kylo is the new kid in the school. Silent, awkward, and in desperate need of interaction. No two people could be any more different, yet, they both have dark pasts which will bring them closer together than they could possibly imagine. Together they must work to put the pieces together of their pasts to find the answers they've waited their whole lives to find.
It's the final day of February and Kylo feels like it'll be like any other day. However, things take a turn for the worst when Sagar finds him. After Sagar rouses Kylo, Tye finds him once again and makes a decision which will be his first step for self improvement.
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It's the final day of February and Kylo feels like it'll be like any other day. However, things take a turn for the worst when Sagar finds him. After Sagar rouses Kylo, Tye finds him once again and makes a decision which will be his first step for self improvement.
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You did a real good job of the two agreeing on being friends, which is great because it's a really important thing to have happened. I loved it.
A part that I liked on this was your way of describing Tye's expressionless face as a blank canvas, then went on into even more poetic detail (or something around that XD). Real clever and interesting to read. I'm really hooked on this, you're doing great :D
And I'm glad Kylo got home safe ^^ lol