great 1st round ^_^ i'm on the edge of seat with excitement

*claps slowly* Heh heh, fantastic first turnout. Almost wish I could've taken part, but I suppose next time, Hm? ^.^

Hehe, you made me seem like an asshole... I like it n.n

xD Didn't try and make you come off like that, more like an honest critic.

I know, and it was really well done. I can honestly say I would more likely than not be like that if I got caught so early.

Although, I have to say, I absolutely DETEST Sherbert :P It is made of pure and utter ewwwww

Well I suppose that's a good note for the future. xD I rather like sherbert personally but that's me...

I know, most do... I realize that I am the odd wolfdragon out on that one and do not begrudge anyone else for liking it whatsoever.

D'aww, it's not that big of a deal.

Also be on AIM or MSN or something more. D:< Hard to talk with someone who's never around! :P

I'll try y.y... I'm always busy lately.

Very cunning you. XD

Awww, opted not to do the squeaky here? Still awesome and love the scene, quite cute! <3 Thanks a lot again! *snugs! with big, squeaky-slick arms!*

Fantastic first round and just love the range of different inflation there.

but I am not sticking around to watch them for too long now hehe :)

yay! this was fun! i'm moving on ^-^

my foxy saved me... i needs to snuggle him in thanks. *goes to do so*

This...is...like the best story collection I've read ever!(T.=.T)*sniff*
I love them all in their unique touch you gave them, dude. I would spoil to much on everything so I just can repeat that I enjoyed every of the settings, the surpising outcomes in that you achieved it to get your goal and prank everyone. Some parts were really funny, some very exciting and even a bit scary. I just love the dimensions your stories always take, Zee. It's always impressive what you can do! You're like the wolf with the thousand faces and you're so good. You could probably trick the best magicians I'm sure.(-^.=.^-)

Again, I really adored this one and not just because I had the luck to be in it. You really surpassed yourself and it's really totodily awesome, ahahaha. Oh, and my story was so wonderful in every aspect I find! It's like you were reading my Totodude's deepest wishes and made this prank scary but also such a dreamfully happening to him. Loosing like this is quite the best that could happened. I want to glomp you for this!(~^.///.^~) <-- feels like if it's the first place instead

Really, I just can recommend to everyone to read every of thos cool expansion stories and comment for Zee. These will make you smile and tempted to read more! *swings a fan for Zee*

Dude, I know I'll love the other rounds and say it's just a shame we haven't a comic artist who can also make some of such high quality stories into pics(flash movies would also be great, ahaha). For now I'll keep my fingers crossed for my dude Tay to get more further and satisfied when you catch him, ehehe.(~.=.o)

Thanks for this, Zee. I appreciate it a lot what you did there and say: Wohoo! You're totodily awesome!(-^.=.^-)*jumps on the +fav button and saves the story*

Wow... I'm impressed. xD I don't think I've had a comment as heartfelt as this one. Thanks a bunch!

Oh, I'm happy that I could give you at least a bit back with that.*jumps arround and tailwags*
What should I say, tehehe. I think it's my a bit naive and direct kid. I wanna say it louf when someone made me happy and your story made me very happy, dude. You are welcome!(-^.=.^-)*hugs your leg*

Ahahaha, it's a shame that your commissions are closed because in the meantime I thought of a not ever happened scenario. It was a funny idea about trying on one of the Zee fan forums arround the net to invite you to my b-day party on 2nd of April and you actually crash the party and make even the preday to something spreaded with your several traps because it's the day of pranks 1st of April. That would have been awesome I'm sure, hehehe(-^.=.^-)

Shiny batty bat watching batty bat's being all batty! Quite the grand collection of 8 shorts to go with the start of the season. Definitely loved the comical nature that went with the stories...got Yakety Sax stuck in my head now. XD

Tehehe, if these would be an anime the music would really be great for an AMV.(-^.=.^-)

Great work! I'm only part way through and I love it!

Read and enjoyed it, Zee! The flatorwuff seems to be getting more devious... or is that just me?

I just wish they got BIGGER, but I know this is only round 1. x3

Gotta adjust my levels of deviousness as people wise up to me! Otherwise my pranking streak might suffer a hit or two. D:

I dunno, suffering a smack or two is never too bad a thing... oh! You meant... ah. Nevermind. x3 The pooltoy-ification is new, I wondered how long it would take for a flatorwuff to make actual rubbery balloons of his victims. :P

Very very well written! But one critique I have to give..
The line "After all, why would someone set themselves up to lose the game," has a vast double meaning..

It seems as if the inflater wolf, himself, has lost the game, as well as ALL the readers!

You must have been in a hurry; you didn't even twit Light for needing a rename to 'Heavy'.

Good to see this 'round' of Manhunt Inflation underway. You do always have such style when it comes to the many and multifarious methods of inflation and expansion in your arsenal.

I just started watching, and I've gotta say your stories are awesome. Sadly, it looks like I've missed the signup by a couple of months... I'll try to get in the next time you're open. :3

I really like the mix of stuff you're doing in these as well, although the WG is by far my favorite. The fact that you're making it sort of a mystery is nice too, although it's pretty obvious the winner won't be in the first couple of rounds. :)