EDIT:Changed it from Naxeth to Ranix, Nari's Nobody, telling his story. I prefer this.
Yeah, I can write. I don't do it often, but I do it.
Anyways, this is the first part of "The Key to Eternity," the story of my Nobody, Ranix.
The Key to Eternity
Chapter 1: Prologue
The World that Never Was. A dark, mysterious world. And my home. My name is Ranix. I'm a Nobody, and an apprentice to the Organization. I'm quite unique, because of my powers. I wield a Keyblade, but that's not the only thing special about me. I can control the fabric of Time, however, not in the same way as Luxord. I command Youth. How I came to be in the Organization is quite the story. I guess I should start at the beginning. How I came to be...
I was a boy, about 15 years old. I lived in Twilight Town with my sister, Niria. We got along pretty well, but we did have our troubles. She was quite competetive. I say "was" because Niria has changed. She's a Nobody, as well, and Xirian is quite the fighter herself. She doesn't wield the Key, but she has special Chakrams that can shoot blades. But, anyways, I'm getting off track. Back to my story...
One day, Niria and I were walking home, eating some sea-salt ice cream and talking, when I saw something out of the corner of my eye. A flash of white. I started to follow it, but Niria stopped me.
"Where are you heading off to, Nar? We've gotta get home," she said.
"Niria, I saw something over there. It was something white, and-"
"Coulda just been a paper in the wind. Come on," She said as she practically dragged me home. As we walked away, I couldn't help but feel that it wasn't just anything. It was someone, or something, and it wanted us. Little did I know how right I was.
It was late at night when I heard something moving in the house. I climbed out of bed to see what it was. As I walked, I looked into Niria's room. To me, it seemed more like a room for an 8-year-old than for a 16-year old. Her furniture, accessories, bedding, everything, was dedicated to Barbie. I rolled my eyes because of all of it, and was glad to see that she was still asleep, because she's kinda...strict. She'd try to get me back to bed. I needed to see what was downstairs, first. I snuck past her room, and headed downstairs. I heard a crash in the living room, and peeked in there. What I saw was a tall, white thing wrecking the room. I grabbed a nearby stick that I had found in the woods. I walked into the room, and shouted at it.
"Hey! Who are you, and what are you doing here?" I said.
The thing turned around, and I saw that it had no face. Just a zipper and some kinda symbol on its head. I held the stick tightly, and swung at it. The thing bent out of the way, and came at me. I managed to avoid it, but then it kicked me and knocked me back. I groaned and got up, swinging the stick. I gasped when I saw the stick go right through it, not doing anything to it.
"What the-" I started to say, but was knocked away again, dropping the stick. As the thing came towards me, I saw a flash of light from my hand, and looked at my hand. What I saw was a Keyblade. I didn't know what it was, though. I suddenly heard Niria's voice.
"Nari, what are you doing up?"
The Thing turned to her, made this strange hissing noise, and ran at her. I looked at the Keyblade, and did what I did next almost by instinct. I held the Keyblade tight, ran at the thing, and swung, slicing it right in half. It dissappeared in a weird mist.
Niria looked utterly shocked. "What the hell just happened?"
"I have no idea, Niria, but something's up. I get the feeling that someone's after us. Why, I don't know..."
"Well, whatever, we still need to sleep. Let's get back to bed."
I nodded in agreement, and headed back to my bed, and fell asleep. The dream that followed was very strange...
TO BE CONTINUED...
Yeah, I can write. I don't do it often, but I do it.
Anyways, this is the first part of "The Key to Eternity," the story of my Nobody, Ranix.
The Key to Eternity
Chapter 1: Prologue
The World that Never Was. A dark, mysterious world. And my home. My name is Ranix. I'm a Nobody, and an apprentice to the Organization. I'm quite unique, because of my powers. I wield a Keyblade, but that's not the only thing special about me. I can control the fabric of Time, however, not in the same way as Luxord. I command Youth. How I came to be in the Organization is quite the story. I guess I should start at the beginning. How I came to be...
I was a boy, about 15 years old. I lived in Twilight Town with my sister, Niria. We got along pretty well, but we did have our troubles. She was quite competetive. I say "was" because Niria has changed. She's a Nobody, as well, and Xirian is quite the fighter herself. She doesn't wield the Key, but she has special Chakrams that can shoot blades. But, anyways, I'm getting off track. Back to my story...
One day, Niria and I were walking home, eating some sea-salt ice cream and talking, when I saw something out of the corner of my eye. A flash of white. I started to follow it, but Niria stopped me.
"Where are you heading off to, Nar? We've gotta get home," she said.
"Niria, I saw something over there. It was something white, and-"
"Coulda just been a paper in the wind. Come on," She said as she practically dragged me home. As we walked away, I couldn't help but feel that it wasn't just anything. It was someone, or something, and it wanted us. Little did I know how right I was.
It was late at night when I heard something moving in the house. I climbed out of bed to see what it was. As I walked, I looked into Niria's room. To me, it seemed more like a room for an 8-year-old than for a 16-year old. Her furniture, accessories, bedding, everything, was dedicated to Barbie. I rolled my eyes because of all of it, and was glad to see that she was still asleep, because she's kinda...strict. She'd try to get me back to bed. I needed to see what was downstairs, first. I snuck past her room, and headed downstairs. I heard a crash in the living room, and peeked in there. What I saw was a tall, white thing wrecking the room. I grabbed a nearby stick that I had found in the woods. I walked into the room, and shouted at it.
"Hey! Who are you, and what are you doing here?" I said.
The thing turned around, and I saw that it had no face. Just a zipper and some kinda symbol on its head. I held the stick tightly, and swung at it. The thing bent out of the way, and came at me. I managed to avoid it, but then it kicked me and knocked me back. I groaned and got up, swinging the stick. I gasped when I saw the stick go right through it, not doing anything to it.
"What the-" I started to say, but was knocked away again, dropping the stick. As the thing came towards me, I saw a flash of light from my hand, and looked at my hand. What I saw was a Keyblade. I didn't know what it was, though. I suddenly heard Niria's voice.
"Nari, what are you doing up?"
The Thing turned to her, made this strange hissing noise, and ran at her. I looked at the Keyblade, and did what I did next almost by instinct. I held the Keyblade tight, ran at the thing, and swung, slicing it right in half. It dissappeared in a weird mist.
Niria looked utterly shocked. "What the hell just happened?"
"I have no idea, Niria, but something's up. I get the feeling that someone's after us. Why, I don't know..."
"Well, whatever, we still need to sleep. Let's get back to bed."
I nodded in agreement, and headed back to my bed, and fell asleep. The dream that followed was very strange...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Teachers all my life tell about how "1st person writing is weak." But this is well-done.
It's also short and sweet. A.K.A. to the point, gives me the story and an image in my head without being overly-flowery. I also noticed a lack of grammar mistakes. Yaaaaay.
KH and fanfiction ftw.
Teachers all my life tell about how "1st person writing is weak." But this is well-done.
It's also short and sweet. A.K.A. to the point, gives me the story and an image in my head without being overly-flowery. I also noticed a lack of grammar mistakes. Yaaaaay.
KH and fanfiction ftw.
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