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Sorry for all these WIP's guys. XD
I just like oppinions on this stuff. ;3;
Anywho, Tammy Claims she's hot. -n- (of course she's hot, a 19 year old Tsutarja is always hot.)
but no she claims she's hot, as in, The sun is making her sweat.
Marshman comes in to SAVE THE DAY.
Then what he claims she's cool now, then she self-pokes herself for wobblyness.
Is it bad that I was aroused by this whole thing? considered the simplicity of it?
What they Say:
Tammy: It's HOOOOT
Marshman: (in the end) you're Cool now!
Things I need to work on:
So far, I think I need to work on the wobbling a bit more
-Water Flow movement
I just like oppinions on this stuff. ;3;
Anywho, Tammy Claims she's hot. -n- (of course she's hot, a 19 year old Tsutarja is always hot.)
but no she claims she's hot, as in, The sun is making her sweat.
Marshman comes in to SAVE THE DAY.
Then what he claims she's cool now, then she self-pokes herself for wobblyness.
Is it bad that I was aroused by this whole thing? considered the simplicity of it?
What they Say:
Tammy: It's HOOOOT
Marshman: (in the end) you're Cool now!
Things I need to work on:
So far, I think I need to work on the wobbling a bit more
-Water Flow movement
Category Flash / Inflation
Species Snake / Serpent
Size 550 x 400px
File Size 121.6 kB
It's like saying that people feel bad after drawing appropriate porn.
I'm thoroughly impressed and definitely enjoy this little flash.
It feels like it skips around a little towards the end considering emotions and the like. Although I like the little pauses, Tammy considers getting a full tummy pretty lightly after her surprised expression when she was poked. I think having her poke her belly a little first before hand would be nice, then the huge wobble. Marshman probably should say his line and have his glee face a little earlier post-inflation as well.
I'm thoroughly impressed and definitely enjoy this little flash.
It feels like it skips around a little towards the end considering emotions and the like. Although I like the little pauses, Tammy considers getting a full tummy pretty lightly after her surprised expression when she was poked. I think having her poke her belly a little first before hand would be nice, then the huge wobble. Marshman probably should say his line and have his glee face a little earlier post-inflation as well.
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