Here is the first page XD....I'm still getting used to the style myself...it's working out pretty well....changes will be made if necessary.Words in parenthesis are little side notes I write in the comic.
Mikey:Uhh....Don-Don, explain to me why we are here again.(Michelangelo;youngest;cocky,playful;arrogant;wields nunchaku)
Don:Don't you remember?You agreed to help me find some new parts for my inventions.(Donatello;second youngest brother;genius,quiet,thoughtful,and quite gentle;wields bo staff)
Mikey:I...did?
Don:that scrap piece of metal should prove useful.
...kitchen
Raph:mmmm....I love my cereal.
Raph:Man,this cereal is bangin'!(Raphael;third youngest;hotheaded,rash,yet very protective;wields sai)(Would Raph ever say that?)
Leo:Geez,Raph.
Leo:that's what you always say when you eat. cereal.(Leonardo;oldest;honorable,disciplined,obedient,brave;wields katana)
Mikey:not only that,but he's like,totally obnoxious.
Raph:Obnoxious,HUH!?*pounds Mikey*
Mikey:AHHHH!!!
Raph:WHO'S OBNXIOUS NOW!!!??

yeh...XD