Delilah ©
mayfurr
another character, another try at action scenes: this time it's Mayfurr's "Woman of negotiable affection", Delilah.
I think I'll try a different perspective fior the trees in the close background; this is too extreme.
critics and/or redlines are welcome.
mayfurranother character, another try at action scenes: this time it's Mayfurr's "Woman of negotiable affection", Delilah.
I think I'll try a different perspective fior the trees in the close background; this is too extreme.
critics and/or redlines are welcome.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fetish Other
Species Canine (Other)
Size 599 x 761px
File Size 70 kB
Listed in Folders
Looking good so far!
Though for some reason her left arm appears to be bending backwards - I think it's how the fold at the elbow joint is placed. I'm also thinking perhaps that she's holding the knife blades too "upright", and that the wrists/blades need to be oriented so the knife blades are pointing more towards her target / the viewer.
Oh, and Delilah has floppy canine ears rather than pointed
Though for some reason her left arm appears to be bending backwards - I think it's how the fold at the elbow joint is placed. I'm also thinking perhaps that she's holding the knife blades too "upright", and that the wrists/blades need to be oriented so the knife blades are pointing more towards her target / the viewer.
Oh, and Delilah has floppy canine ears rather than pointed
okay. she's supposed to bend her arms backwards, in a way you'd take your arm back before punching. the rest I can easily adjust, thanks for the input. :)
and somewhere there must be my copy of delilah's reference, so that will be corrected, too. :)
now that you emntioned it, the angle of the elbow needs changing. I'll see to it. :)
and somewhere there must be my copy of delilah's reference, so that will be corrected, too. :)
now that you emntioned it, the angle of the elbow needs changing. I'll see to it. :)
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