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A piece for 
avereth, who has been extremely patient with me :) This is his hyena character devouring a hapless bunch of meerkats. As you can see, he already has a few in his belly.
In the original sketch there was a box labeled "Live Meerkats" sitting at his feet, but I changed it because it kind of made the setting look awkward.
I admit I'm still learning with vore pieces, so I appreciate any feedback!
avereth, who has been extremely patient with me :) This is his hyena character devouring a hapless bunch of meerkats. As you can see, he already has a few in his belly.In the original sketch there was a box labeled "Live Meerkats" sitting at his feet, but I changed it because it kind of made the setting look awkward.
I admit I'm still learning with vore pieces, so I appreciate any feedback!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Vore
Species Hyena
Size 1024 x 768px
File Size 623.7 kB
This is great, I am quite pleased. You did it pretty quickly. The difference between the flats and this one is quite a bit! I love what you did with the background; I could probably stand to learn a thing or two from you on how to properly compose a one. That subtle splatter effect is neat too. I am more than satisfied with the belly you stuck on Ave. The contours and shading make it look great. The dangly meerkat is also quite awesome. That freaked out look is spot on and it really looks like it's squirming as hard as it can. Nosegrab ha! Those nicely included teeth in Ave's jaw look nice. Not enough artists emphasize the fact there's lots of quite usable teeth in there!
I suppose if anything is to be changed one thing is that his eye is bugging me for some reason. I think the tiny pupil is making him look almost zoned out or something. Perhaps try increasing the size of the pupil, adding some green to his eyes, and maybe not have them quite as half closed looking as they are now so he doesn't have the snake eye thing going on. :P Only other thing probably seems overly picky, but could you try to get his navel looking similar to what was on the one reference I gave you for his stomach? It's supposed to be furless there like on the reference so the dark colored skin would be showing where his navel is exposed past the surrounding fur.
It seems a lot of others like this image. This pleases me. :D
I suppose if anything is to be changed one thing is that his eye is bugging me for some reason. I think the tiny pupil is making him look almost zoned out or something. Perhaps try increasing the size of the pupil, adding some green to his eyes, and maybe not have them quite as half closed looking as they are now so he doesn't have the snake eye thing going on. :P Only other thing probably seems overly picky, but could you try to get his navel looking similar to what was on the one reference I gave you for his stomach? It's supposed to be furless there like on the reference so the dark colored skin would be showing where his navel is exposed past the surrounding fur.
It seems a lot of others like this image. This pleases me. :D
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